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THE FALL 2020
She offers her
Dark well.
Staring into the deep
As if it were headlights,
He strips down,
Hoping that enough
Of her tears
Exist at the bottom
To keep him from
Crashing,
But not enough
To allow him to drown.
Dark well.
Staring into the deep
As if it were headlights,
He strips down,
Hoping that enough
Of her tears
Exist at the bottom
To keep him from
Crashing,
But not enough
To allow him to drown.
Published 22nd Nov 2020
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22nd Nov 2020 10:04pm
22nd Nov 2020 11:05pm
I hated putting them in but I felt I needed the punctuation because the subject in the second stanza is at the end rather than the beginning.
