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Old
will you love me when I am a crone
and my youth I no longer own
when my face is wrinkled like a dried prune
and my body is long past its bloom
will you love me when I'm old
with nothing but the twinkle in my eyes to behold
and my youth I no longer own
when my face is wrinkled like a dried prune
and my body is long past its bloom
will you love me when I'm old
with nothing but the twinkle in my eyes to behold
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Beauty .. Past..
5th Feb 2012 5:30pm
Here the wisdom of old
Says
Beauty .. Past..
And aging .. The future ..
Aging and beauty or
One thing has the same person or any race of cosmic races
Any races going through
Stage of seed
Embryo
Baby small .. Not about him and do not force ..
Child or young child
Skin soft
We make it bites and foreplay
Childhood and adolescence, even large
May become a middle-aged
Without the knowledge of good to us what happened around us
Then occurs a sudden life
And the challenge of life
And hit us without the knowledge of our aging
Where life breathes pain of making us
And taking the spirit of young people without the knowledge of our
Until we reach middle age
And become the only
Or old
Or depression
And leaves us with family and friends
Despite
What have the feelings of his sweet
Or memories
But
No life of those who advocate
Everyone drowning
Life
We controlled
Although the spring of Age
Needs a lot of care
And love
And a touch of tenderness
Rightly
And
Real
Thank you
Making me attention
But I feel old age from the time of past
And I want the challenge of life
If the time in my life
Maybe I'll rose
Or flower in the spring of Age
Thank you
beautiful
Although it is short
But carry a lot
Secrets
Thank you ..
Akhenaten, Egypt
On February 05 ** 2012 after Birth
Says
Beauty .. Past..
And aging .. The future ..
Aging and beauty or
One thing has the same person or any race of cosmic races
Any races going through
Stage of seed
Embryo
Baby small .. Not about him and do not force ..
Child or young child
Skin soft
We make it bites and foreplay
Childhood and adolescence, even large
May become a middle-aged
Without the knowledge of good to us what happened around us
Then occurs a sudden life
And the challenge of life
And hit us without the knowledge of our aging
Where life breathes pain of making us
And taking the spirit of young people without the knowledge of our
Until we reach middle age
And become the only
Or old
Or depression
And leaves us with family and friends
Despite
What have the feelings of his sweet
Or memories
But
No life of those who advocate
Everyone drowning
Life
We controlled
Although the spring of Age
Needs a lot of care
And love
And a touch of tenderness
Rightly
And
Real
Thank you
Making me attention
But I feel old age from the time of past
And I want the challenge of life
If the time in my life
Maybe I'll rose
Or flower in the spring of Age
Thank you
beautiful
Although it is short
But carry a lot
Secrets
Thank you ..
Akhenaten, Egypt
On February 05 ** 2012 after Birth
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re: Beauty .. Past..
Yes. It is short. One always hopes to be loved by a true love no matter what, and that true love will be able to see beauty where others see only old age. :)
much love sends your queen!
much love sends your queen!
re: re: Beauty .. Past..
12th Feb 2012 6:08pm
Yes. Always make your words magic gold
to me >> i see your strong words
here or there
The poem was short.
Really
But influential
Strongly
True love
Ana always us through
Loved by true love
However, many of the lines disappeared
Or words
What's in the heart
In heart
Always and never
This is true love
You will be able to me
To see the beauty
And together
Really.
And a lot of love sent to me
Queen of my own!to me for ever
Yes
Real
I miss you always
kiss your hand
to me >> i see your strong words
here or there
The poem was short.
Really
But influential
Strongly
True love
Ana always us through
Loved by true love
However, many of the lines disappeared
Or words
What's in the heart
In heart
Always and never
This is true love
You will be able to me
To see the beauty
And together
Really.
And a lot of love sent to me
Queen of my own!to me for ever
Yes
Real
I miss you always
kiss your hand
1
re: re: re: Beauty .. Past..
13th Feb 2012 4:52am
I am glad that you seemed to like this poem.
As you know your opinion is very important to me.
Miss you always!
Will write to you in the private.
All my love to you love!
As you know your opinion is very important to me.
Miss you always!
Will write to you in the private.
All my love to you love!
Love never gets old
13th Feb 2012 4:46am
you may age in numbers but if you love someone those wrinkles never show and your joints never ache, cause your heart stays forever young
1
re: Love never gets old
13th Feb 2012 4:48am
Re: Old
6th Aug 2012 3:44am
We worry about the effects of time and then we get older and realize the imperfections don't seem as important!
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Old
Anonymous
15th Sep 2012 4:42am
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Re: Old
10th Jun 2015 5:07pm
Oh how sweet an inquiry. Beauty is fleeting- it is always love that will last and beauty of one's soul is what we truly fall in love with.
Graceful ink, keep it flowing!
Here's to you!
Graceful ink, keep it flowing!
Here's to you!
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