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Eyes of a stranger
If I could see through the eyes of a stranger
I wonder
Would I have high ambitions and goals
Ones that seem so tall
Ones that are bold
If I could see through the eyes of a stranger
Would I approach me
Does she appear natty
Does she appear clean
If I could see through the eyes of a stranger
I wonder
Would I believe in god
And heaven
And hell too
If I could see through the eyes of a stranger
What would I find interesting
Would I have similar hobbies
Would I like you?
I wonder
Would I have high ambitions and goals
Ones that seem so tall
Ones that are bold
If I could see through the eyes of a stranger
Would I approach me
Does she appear natty
Does she appear clean
If I could see through the eyes of a stranger
I wonder
Would I believe in god
And heaven
And hell too
If I could see through the eyes of a stranger
What would I find interesting
Would I have similar hobbies
Would I like you?
Published 18th Nov 2020
Author's Note
I feel like this poem can have a lot of potential, it will be edited later on.
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18th Nov 2020 9:20pm
Honesty, reflection, and broadening perspective. Heavy on the refrain, but it still works well. 😊
18th Nov 2020 10:17pm
19th Nov 2020 00:03am
19th Nov 2020 10:02pm
I wish we could see through the eyes of a stranger. We would definitely understand each other better! ❤️
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
21st Nov 2020 10:02pm
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29th Feb 2024 00:49am
As they say, the eyes are the windows to the soul. Connecting with people can be easy for some. Glances open up a world of opportunities to get to know people.
Nice job.
Nice job.
