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Kissed
It's always nice
To hear I'm missed
By he, whose lips
My lips have kissed
Better yet to feel
The total bliss
While making up
For those we missed
To hear I'm missed
By he, whose lips
My lips have kissed
Better yet to feel
The total bliss
While making up
For those we missed
Published 1st Nov 2020
| Edited 23rd Feb 2021
Author's Note
From one kiss alcoholic to another.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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1st Nov 2020 8:57am
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1st Nov 2020 10:21am
1st Nov 2020 10:33am
Thank you so much for the compliment and the honor of being on your RL. I appreciate you!
1st Nov 2020 10:34am
1st Nov 2020 10:51am
"Kiss Alcoholic" I love it. 12 steps be damned....this is one habit worth keeping. Favorite passage,
"By he, whose lips
My lips have kissed"
"By he, whose lips
My lips have kissed"
1st Nov 2020 10:56am
1st Nov 2020 11:34am
5th Nov 2020 3:35pm
1st Nov 2020 2:34pm
Dear FM,
Likey like. Clear, sharp love the rhyming aspect. Sweet subject matter and lovely write for an early morning read. H🌷
Likey like. Clear, sharp love the rhyming aspect. Sweet subject matter and lovely write for an early morning read. H🌷
1st Nov 2020 2:41pm
