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Enamored
Imagry
Metaphor
Rhyme
and more
Words my dog
No doubt adores
Brevity
Personification
Alliteration
So poetry flows
Don't mean a thing
At least, to him I know
Take all
Of these words
It's anyone's choice
He welcomes them all
He's just so enamoured
With the sound of my voice
Metaphor
Rhyme
and more
Words my dog
No doubt adores
Brevity
Personification
Alliteration
So poetry flows
Don't mean a thing
At least, to him I know
Take all
Of these words
It's anyone's choice
He welcomes them all
He's just so enamoured
With the sound of my voice
Published 30th Oct 2020
Author's Note
This is written about and dedicated to my darling dog, Ninja, who awaits my very words.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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30th Oct 2020 2:08pm
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30th Oct 2020 3:12pm
30th Oct 2020 4:18pm
Great approach, which is always the case with your amazing talent. Have a positive day and keep smiling. Hugs and peace. oral
What? No kisses, dreamboat? Perhaps...no, I won't go there! May I say it is a bit of a shame.....my lips are lonesome.
P.S. Thank you for your wonderful remark. I'm no Emily Dickinson but I do always give it my best shot.
P.S. Thank you for your wonderful remark. I'm no Emily Dickinson but I do always give it my best shot.
30th Oct 2020 7:52pm
At least your pets listen I have cats 😃 I love all the words you chose. Brava!
30th Oct 2020 10:12pm
Yes, he does listen very attentively and adoringly probably because he is a rescue dog that is spoiled rotten. I grew up with cats so I know how inattentive they can be.
I want to thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my little love offering to my pet. It made my heart smile when I read your comments. I really thank you for that more than you know.
Faith
I want to thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my little love offering to my pet. It made my heart smile when I read your comments. I really thank you for that more than you know.
Faith
30th Oct 2020 8:26pm
30th Oct 2020 9:10pm
30th Oct 2020 10:19pm
How very sweet! I will tell Ninja you stopped by and left your paw prints! He absolutely adores friendly visitors and he will be pleased to know you found your way here. Hugs.
30th Oct 2020 9:10pm
31st Oct 2020 00:31am
I have Labs. They're not keen on poetry, but will follow the bouncing ball. :-)
An enjoyed read, Faith
An enjoyed read, Faith
31st Oct 2020 1:40am
Yes...that ever bouncing ball. My dog loves them, too. Thank you for your wonderful words and the honor of being on your RL...I appreciate it.
1st Nov 2020 2:42am
1st Nov 2020 7:05am
2nd Nov 2020 10:04pm
"He's just so enamoured
With the sound of my voice"
Beautiful poem and I love the picture. :)
With the sound of my voice"
Beautiful poem and I love the picture. :)
2nd Nov 2020 10:44pm
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I really appreciate you stopping by.
