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Betrayed
She didn't know that
you already had a woman
but you knew
from the very start
Why you would sacrifice
what we had
for someone else
escapes me
and it hurts so
just to know
you betrayed me
in the one way
I thought you never
would (or even could)
you already had a woman
but you knew
from the very start
Why you would sacrifice
what we had
for someone else
escapes me
and it hurts so
just to know
you betrayed me
in the one way
I thought you never
would (or even could)
Published 27th Oct 2020
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27th Oct 2020 6:12pm
Once a relationship built on trust is betrayed, there is nothing to go back to. Been the victim once. Nice write.
27th Oct 2020 9:57pm
Anonymous
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27th Oct 2020 8:21pm
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27th Oct 2020 9:56pm
Thank you, Rew. That's so sweet of you but I cheered up the day we split the house in two. I got the inside and he got the outside. But no worries...I may have just written this today but the whole thing took place a long, long time ago.
Anonymous
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27th Oct 2020 10:08pm
Thanks,
Signed this day in late October.
Very truly yours...
Your commenter and avid reader!
Faith
Signed this day in late October.
Very truly yours...
Your commenter and avid reader!
Faith
28th Oct 2020 6:00am
Dear F,
Incredible isn’t it? It’s a hurt like no other because at one time there was a mutual understanding and agreed upon vow.
I’m glad this is a past tense for you and freedom is yours. But I’m still going to put a hex on him. 😉
H🌷
Incredible isn’t it? It’s a hurt like no other because at one time there was a mutual understanding and agreed upon vow.
I’m glad this is a past tense for you and freedom is yours. But I’m still going to put a hex on him. 😉
H🌷
28th Oct 2020 7:21am
Thank you very much! As for the hex, I certainly hope so. It's more than kind of you. Now, excuse me while I go and stick another pin in my voo-doo doll!
