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The Bright Spot
Trust me...
I will not abandon you
like other people have
done in the past
leaving you an orphan
That will never happen
to you again
Love me...
that's all I ask of you
and yet I know you do
much more than I deserve
still I'm sure...
that is all you want from me
and you're so welcome to
all the love I have
inside my heart
Come play....
We'll toss a ball
or chase a squirrel
across the lawn
and as you age
I want you to know
I couldn't even imagine
life without you for
You are the bright spot
In all my days
I will not abandon you
like other people have
done in the past
leaving you an orphan
That will never happen
to you again
Love me...
that's all I ask of you
and yet I know you do
much more than I deserve
still I'm sure...
that is all you want from me
and you're so welcome to
all the love I have
inside my heart
Come play....
We'll toss a ball
or chase a squirrel
across the lawn
and as you age
I want you to know
I couldn't even imagine
life without you for
You are the bright spot
In all my days
Published 25th Oct 2020
Author's Note
Thinking of my beloved rescue dog and cherished friend. This is for Ninja.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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25th Oct 2020 5:50am
They are just that, aren't they. I now have two greeting me on my returns home.
Their my constant companions when ever possible.
Love the write and the pic is great.
Their my constant companions when ever possible.
Love the write and the pic is great.
25th Oct 2020 6:13am
Thank you so much for your wonderful message. I really appreciateYes, little Ninja is my pride and joy. I was never blessed with any children. Well, unless you are counting the furry four legged ones.
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25th Oct 2020 11:51am
Aw ... I miss my dogs ... been thinking about getting two more ... wonderful warming write dear Faith ...
25th Oct 2020 11:57am
Thank you for your wonderful response to this. I'm never lonely with Ninja around.
25th Oct 2020 9:06pm
Dear F,
It’s a beautiful thing when love is unconditional. While I know it exists I haven’t truly felt it since my horse died. She was a skittish beast but a tonic every time I needed her. Your poem has allowed me to remember that relationship with gratitude and I’m grateful. Lovely write. H🌷
It’s a beautiful thing when love is unconditional. While I know it exists I haven’t truly felt it since my horse died. She was a skittish beast but a tonic every time I needed her. Your poem has allowed me to remember that relationship with gratitude and I’m grateful. Lovely write. H🌷
25th Oct 2020 10:59pm
Your message really moved me. Thank you for your kind words. I know exactly what you mean when you said you needed him. The only way I have been able to recover from the loss of a pet is to go to the shelter and take home another one to love. The unconditional love pet's give us is amazing
