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The Creature

I fell into the darkest Room in the world,
A Room with no walls or doors.
I could feel my mind slipping away, my heart stopped beating, fear was eating me.
I felt like the room had a soul, and the soul was in pain, I could FEEL the room.
In the distance I could see a reflection, the reflection was disfigured. It was dark, yet I could see it. It was showing its tongue, and blood was dripping from it. I could feel the fear consuming me, I wanted to escape.
Then I could see the tears coming from its eyes. But it was not its tears, it was mine. I feel the creature and it can feel me. I gathered all my courage and began walking toward it. I was walking forever but still so far away.  
I could see its eyes and the hunger in them and I felt I knew him.   I asked the creature,  "Who are you?" It did not answer, but I had to know, so I asked again, "Who are you?"
The creature opened its mouth and the tears from its eyes now turned into blood.
Don't you know who i am? My heart stopped because i knew .
" I am you" it said.
Sobbing,  I dropped to my knees ...
I am the creature and the creature is me.
Written by msbeav (Brenda)
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