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Thrill (2020)

here are some thoughts from me to you
wherever you are, whatever you do
whenever these words are drifting by,
while moving around under the sky,...

there is between us a space that is filled
with a deep penetrating mind to mind thrill
everything you think, all that I feel
flows in between us and it is real

when we are trusting, when we let go
when we imagine that we can know
I am with you when you are with me
we are together separately

joined for a moment or two in this time
we resonate freely from mind to mind
with visions appearing while breathing in
then breathing out and in to begin

a deep penetrating mind to mind thrill
the space in between us ecstatically filled
with everything you think, all that I feel
flowing between us with such an appeal
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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