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Eyes
Eyes
Windows to the soul
Although your mouth smiles
Your eyes reflect pain
Eyes
That once shone bright
Now glisten with tears
Your eyes reveal fear
Eyes
Have become an empty void
No longer radiating love
Your eyes cannot be ignored
Eyes
Gaze deeply
Craving affection
Your eyes have lost their direction
Eyes
Windows to your soul
I notice you
With you, I will grow old.
Windows to the soul
Although your mouth smiles
Your eyes reflect pain
Eyes
That once shone bright
Now glisten with tears
Your eyes reveal fear
Eyes
Have become an empty void
No longer radiating love
Your eyes cannot be ignored
Eyes
Gaze deeply
Craving affection
Your eyes have lost their direction
Eyes
Windows to your soul
I notice you
With you, I will grow old.
Published 9th Oct 2020
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9th Oct 2020 9:14pm
We all fear rejection, but we need the right person by our side. Keep on writing.
10th Oct 2020 2:26am
10th Oct 2020 2:32am
10th Oct 2020 2:39am
Yeah, that's cute & could actually be a lot of help. It's gotta come from him but it's nice to know somebody's on his side.
10th Oct 2020 4:46am
A message of acceptance despite faults. Acceptance with out judgment of failure. An inspiring write!🌹🌹🙏
15th Oct 2020 1:07pm
10th Oct 2020 4:26pm
Seeing someone is indeed the balm against feeling invisible and alone. Nice, Joy.
15th Oct 2020 1:08pm
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17th Oct 2020 9:29am
15th Nov 2020 10:35pm
Lovely poem - the hope that your love will rekindle the sparkle in his eyes.
16th Nov 2020 9:15am
1st Dec 2020 00:23am
....incredible emotional write!!! I really love the culmination of this submission. The use of the metaphors using the eyes to express the struggles with relationships culminating with you seeing through his eyes to his soul is beautifully written. Soulmates!!!
1st Dec 2020 3:41am
7th Dec 2020 1:07pm
