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Double Two-Oh
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the year that distance won the game
being close to the ones so dear
never felt so wrong and out of place
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the number that made promises
of changes and growth delivered
with struggles and fear and face masks
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the time that asked for transformation
in the way we see and experience freedom
new stuff to think about
the year that distance won the game
being close to the ones so dear
never felt so wrong and out of place
2 0 2 0
the number that made promises
of changes and growth delivered
with struggles and fear and face masks
2 0 2 0
the time that asked for transformation
in the way we see and experience freedom
new stuff to think about
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Re. Double Two-Oh
7th Oct 2020 12:52pm
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7th Oct 2020 1:45pm
Or the year that we wish wasn't. ;) Either way, I am really happy this resonated with you.
Love,
🌻 Delanee.
Love,
🌻 Delanee.
Re. Double Two-Oh
7th Oct 2020 1:20pm
Well , one thing I find with it , every time I go to the store ,
or encounter people on the street , as I walk , not drive...
A starting point of conversation , is "fuckin' strange shit"...
Then talking begins...;)
Stay safe , best to you !
or encounter people on the street , as I walk , not drive...
A starting point of conversation , is "fuckin' strange shit"...
Then talking begins...;)
Stay safe , best to you !
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Re: Re. Double Two-Oh
7th Oct 2020 1:46pm
It sure makes it so we're all dealing with the same problem. So in a way, it brings us a little closer.
Nice of you to share that silver lining!
🌻 Delanee.
Nice of you to share that silver lining!
🌻 Delanee.
Re. Double Two-Oh
7th Oct 2020 1:48pm
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7th Oct 2020 2:10pm
I always come back, dear Ahavati. Sooner or later.
And yes, I think it already has.
🌻 Delanee.
And yes, I think it already has.
🌻 Delanee.
Re. Double Two-Oh
7th Oct 2020 2:09pm
Short but very true and thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing. Peace. oral
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Re: Re. Double Two-Oh
7th Oct 2020 2:11pm
Short is my niche as you may have noticed.
I am very pleased that you enjoyed the read. Hope to see you around.
🌻 Delanee.
I am very pleased that you enjoyed the read. Hope to see you around.
🌻 Delanee.
Re: Re. Double Two-Oh
7th Oct 2020 2:18pm
Short is a gift few have. One word such as NO, YES, etc. can change the destiny of a person, relationship, or movement. Hugs and peace. oral
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Re. Double Two-Oh
7th Oct 2020 4:43pm
Dear D,
Talk about “in a nutshell” you’ve summed up what this year has morphed into. Feels like the lost year even trying to make the best of it is an overwhelming challenge. I love the way you’ve formatted the piece into each section to maximize the importance of everything lost or on hold. Well said and done. H🌷
Talk about “in a nutshell” you’ve summed up what this year has morphed into. Feels like the lost year even trying to make the best of it is an overwhelming challenge. I love the way you’ve formatted the piece into each section to maximize the importance of everything lost or on hold. Well said and done. H🌷
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Re: Re. Double Two-Oh
8th Oct 2020 8:15am
Dear H,
Summaries seem to be my thing these days. I'm really glad this piece spoke to you as well as to others apparently. I wasn't too certain about it at first, but the formatting won me over.
🌻 Delanee.
Summaries seem to be my thing these days. I'm really glad this piece spoke to you as well as to others apparently. I wasn't too certain about it at first, but the formatting won me over.
🌻 Delanee.
Re. Double Two-Oh
7th Oct 2020 7:34pm
What a truly "long, strange trip it's been." You encapsulate well the angst of the time. I just saw your full profile pic, is that you? What intoxicating body art.
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8th Oct 2020 8:14am
Thank you so much, dear Gahddess.
The profile pic is indeed me- but the full sleeve was a fake one I put on for the occassion of a themed stage performance. I do have some tattoos but a full sleeve will have to wait for a couple more years.
🌻 Delanee.
The profile pic is indeed me- but the full sleeve was a fake one I put on for the occassion of a themed stage performance. I do have some tattoos but a full sleeve will have to wait for a couple more years.
🌻 Delanee.
Re: Re. Double Two-Oh
8th Oct 2020 5:58pm
A poetry slam, perhaps? The stage performance. Hey just keep doing the faux-tats, cheaper and you can choose what suits your mood.
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Re: Re. Double Two-Oh
9th Oct 2020 9:01am
Ooh, that would have been cool too, a poetry slam. But it was in fact a performance with a temporary band I formed with coworkers.
We had a festival themed new year's reception and we served the live music.
Faux tats are so versatile. It's great, indeed!
🌻 Delanee.
We had a festival themed new year's reception and we served the live music.
Faux tats are so versatile. It's great, indeed!
🌻 Delanee.
Re: Re. Double Two-Oh
9th Oct 2020 6:37pm
Then you end up with some dudes name permanently inscribed on your body if things just don't work out 😉
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Re. Double Two-Oh
8th Oct 2020 1:15pm
Re: Re. Double Two-Oh
8th Oct 2020 3:02pm
Thanks a lot, Eerie.
It's not about the set-backs but how you handle them, I suppose.
🌻 Delanee.
It's not about the set-backs but how you handle them, I suppose.
🌻 Delanee.
Re. Double Two-Oh
15th Oct 2020 3:21am
It certainly is difficult for those who haven't been able to see or have contact with their loved ones, especially the elderly. It's a paradigm shift of how we are all connected, that the spread of a disease like this can virtually affect everyone.
Hopefully this will be over soon and maybe 21 is the year for all of us to shine.
Great write.
Hopefully this will be over soon and maybe 21 is the year for all of us to shine.
Great write.
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