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St. George
St. George atop his dragon,
I desire death by your flaming breath;
kiss my skin with trembling lips,
slide slowly betwixt wind and water;
devour me whole from below to beyond
as we lend heat to the afternoon sun
I desire death by your flaming breath;
kiss my skin with trembling lips,
slide slowly betwixt wind and water;
devour me whole from below to beyond
as we lend heat to the afternoon sun
Published 1st Oct 2020
Author's Note
Written for the Sexual Matters competition.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 2
comments 13
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The author encourages honest critique.
1st Oct 2020 11:01pm
1st Oct 2020 11:09pm
Ok. I’ve had my moment. There is not a single thing about this that I don’t adore. Well done. Very well done.
1st Oct 2020 11:18pm
*giggle*
When they only give you six lines to work with, you gotta make ‘em count 😈. Thank you so much for your support, Daisy 💜.
When they only give you six lines to work with, you gotta make ‘em count 😈. Thank you so much for your support, Daisy 💜.
2nd Oct 2020 2:00am
2nd Oct 2020 4:03am
2nd Oct 2020 5:23am
Oh my...
Beautiful and sensuous, fiery yet tender - and oozing with passion.
This is wonderful writing, as per your usual!
"I desire death by your flaming breath"
I absolutely adore this line. Like you could die in that moment and be perfectly content <3
Beautiful and sensuous, fiery yet tender - and oozing with passion.
This is wonderful writing, as per your usual!
"I desire death by your flaming breath"
I absolutely adore this line. Like you could die in that moment and be perfectly content <3
2nd Oct 2020 5:39am
Takes a brave man to make love to a dragon LOL. The saint name reminds me of a comedy tv series in the 1960s titled George and the Dragon, the protagonists being acted by the lecherous Sid James and the somewhat risquely named Peggy Mount - though there was no sex in it!
2nd Oct 2020 6:54am
Brave or just plain crazy, it all tends to end the same way LOL. Thank you for the read 💜
2nd Oct 2020 11:17am
Dear L,
My my, says she whilst fanning herself! I’d have written sooner after the first read but I needed a cigarette first.😉
Hot hot hot and the very best of luck for this comp.
You’ve shed quite the different light on St. George for me. As a young ‘un I only knew him because we invoked him in church to watch over the soldiers heading off to Viet Nam. I much prefer this take. Excellent write.
H🌷
My my, says she whilst fanning herself! I’d have written sooner after the first read but I needed a cigarette first.😉
Hot hot hot and the very best of luck for this comp.
You’ve shed quite the different light on St. George for me. As a young ‘un I only knew him because we invoked him in church to watch over the soldiers heading off to Viet Nam. I much prefer this take. Excellent write.
H🌷
3rd Oct 2020 6:11pm
Well, I packed as many old-world euphemisms for sex as I could into six lines, so poor St. George was outed lol. Thank you for reading and supporting in the beautiful way you always do. It always makes my day 💜.
3rd Oct 2020 1:21pm
3rd Oct 2020 6:12pm
