deepundergroundpoetry.com
To Sara
I can still picture her as a little girl
Chubby cheeks holding her teddy bear
She had all these perfect curls
A cute grin with a bow in her hair
She still has that same smile
It’s a special day full of happiness
As I walk her down the isle
She looks beautiful in her white dress…
Today, I gave my sister away
09.27.20
Published 28th Sep 2020
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 2
comments 6
reads 455
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
28th Sep 2020 6:51am
Awww ❤️ so sweet and heartfelt. A big moment for her and you, I am sure... Congrats to her. Very compassionate of you to write a poem just for her :)
4th Oct 2020 1:51am
NB, thank you very much for your kind words (and RL addition).
I was honored that she asked me after our father passed away.
I was honored that she asked me after our father passed away.
28th Sep 2020 10:26am
Dear W,
Beyond beautiful and really lovely of you to share memories and joy of such a wonderful day. Congratulations. H🌷
Beyond beautiful and really lovely of you to share memories and joy of such a wonderful day. Congratulations. H🌷
4th Oct 2020 1:52am
Thank you very much Honoria.
Yes, we have lots of great memories and photographs together. This day's were one of the best.
I'm very thankful to have awesome sisters.
Yes, we have lots of great memories and photographs together. This day's were one of the best.
I'm very thankful to have awesome sisters.
28th Sep 2020 1:26pm
Awwww! Congratulations, Wally! Walking her down the aisle must've been a great honor and very special moment.
Lovely tribute to the occassion!
Lovely tribute to the occassion!
4th Oct 2020 1:54am
Thank you very much Ahavati.
I figured a small verse to remember the occasion would be great way to capture the day would be ok.
I figured a small verse to remember the occasion would be great way to capture the day would be ok.
