Spinning

Very vivid image, beautifully written. All motions easily seen and identify
with. The message is clear. Thank you 🌹🌹🙏

Thank you, Poet🙏🏻

Balance, connection to earth and sky. Excellent write, Jade.


hugs,
buddhakitty.

Thank you, dear Kitty 🙏🏻

This spill is short and powerful; the balance between above and below a living, breathing space.  Beautiful 💜

Thank you, dear Luna 🙏🏻

Perfectly penned and beautifully delivered! Great work as always, Jade. Best of luck in the competition!

Thank you, dear Faith 🙏🏻

My pleasure, dear Poetess!

Dear JP,

I’m fixated on the word dervish. I saw dervish dancers on tv once and was so fascinated by them I can still see them in my head. It was quite beautiful. So is your poem, I just can’t push past their white robes, fezzes and the spinning. I’d be so sick. Your write is lovely, all the best in the comp. you’re awesome as per. H🌷

Thank you, dear Honoria 🙏🏻

Dervish.  Wonder how they can go round and round and round for solong without going dizzy and fainting.

Not like the spinning of a top, but an even & graceful turning in place (even in how they move their feet) while in a spiritual trance; a conduit, a connection.

Ok:  but MY head spins if I watch them toooooooooo long.   Regards, Robert.

Nicely penned Ms. Jade. It serves as a reminder and that this will pass and we will all be reborn.

Exactly, dear Wally.  Thank you, respectfully.🙏🏻

Nice writing