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Lost Goodbye...
When war kills, people vanish, tears fall,
their bodies become part of drifting souls.
Those left never know how or where to say goodbye.
their bodies become part of drifting souls.
Those left never know how or where to say goodbye.
Published 20th Sep 2020
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20th Sep 2020 4:40am
Dear A,
A gaping hole has just been left in my heart by this write. So eloquently put by such loss as war. So overwhelming a thought in an amazing poem. H🌷
A gaping hole has just been left in my heart by this write. So eloquently put by such loss as war. So overwhelming a thought in an amazing poem. H🌷
27th Sep 2020 00:28am
Yert sadly Man never learns and there will other wars and thus other pains.
