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No flow
Writer's block
is like urine retention
You have the urge
to purge
expel
eject
those toxic emotions
fluid commotions
pressure slowly
builds up
feels like you may
burst
But
not a drop
leaks out...
is like urine retention
You have the urge
to purge
expel
eject
those toxic emotions
fluid commotions
pressure slowly
builds up
feels like you may
burst
But
not a drop
leaks out...
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Re. No flow
19th Sep 2020 9:10pm
Sometimes the words don't want to come out, so you watch movies or people watch to get the juices flowing. Keep on writing.
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20th Sep 2020 9:31am
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19th Sep 2020 11:17pm
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20th Sep 2020 9:31am
Thank you so much, dear buddhakitty for dropping by. Appreciate your read n comments. 🌷
Re. No flow
19th Sep 2020 11:26pm
oOF! Anyone who has ever suffered a urinary track or bladder infection can definitely relate to this, Rohini! Well done!
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A friend of mine suffered from urine retention post delivery (C - sec). It was caused due to some meds she was administered. She told me what a difficult situation it was...
Thank you so much, dear Ahavati for the kind support. 😊🌷
Thank you so much, dear Ahavati for the kind support. 😊🌷
Re. No flow
Anonymous
20th Sep 2020 12:35pm
Clever metaphor:) what's needed is a strong 3 day course of inspiration or antibiotics. Lol
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Re: Re. No flow
20th Sep 2020 12:42pm
Haha... That's right :)
Thanks for visiting my page, Honeylove. Liked your comment :)
Thanks for visiting my page, Honeylove. Liked your comment :)
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Anonymous
20th Sep 2020 1:57pm
My pleasure 🌹
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Re. No flow
25th Sep 2020 1:32pm
Been there, done that. This is one of the best descriptions of writers block I've ever read.
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Re: Re. No flow
25th Sep 2020 1:46pm
Hey, thank you so much, dear poet for the wonderful feedback. Very much appreciate your visit. :)
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26th Sep 2020 3:40am
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26th Sep 2020 11:20am
Re. No flow
26th Sep 2020 9:15am
Reading over this again, and it's a great analogy... I hope your writers block fades away soon so we can read more of your beautiful writings ❤️
*hugs*
*hugs*
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26th Sep 2020 11:21am
Re. No flow
1st Oct 2020 1:55pm
Amazing metaphor...we've all been there...feeling the desire but no fire. Thanks. Peace. oral
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1st Oct 2020 2:00pm
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19th Oct 2020 8:15pm