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Is It Love Or Is It Madness?
I welcome you into my life with
heartfelt gladness
no longer do I live in sadness
but is this love or is it madness
Sometimes I feel a certain badness
because I'm always taking chances
with love and romances
so is it really love or is it madness
I love the way you admire me
I crave all of your lovely glances
now, I expect some sweet advances
can this be love or is it madness?
perhaps a little bit of both!
heartfelt gladness
no longer do I live in sadness
but is this love or is it madness
Sometimes I feel a certain badness
because I'm always taking chances
with love and romances
so is it really love or is it madness
I love the way you admire me
I crave all of your lovely glances
now, I expect some sweet advances
can this be love or is it madness?
perhaps a little bit of both!
Published 15th Sep 2020
| Edited 16th Sep 2020
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15th Sep 2020 7:43pm
Crazy mad love ... I want some ... nice emoting/evoking with this dear Faith ...
15th Sep 2020 8:04pm
15th Sep 2020 9:56pm
“Love is merely a madness; and, I tell you, deserves as well a dark house and a whip as madmen do; and the reason why they are not so punish'd and cured is that the lunacy is so ordinary that the whippers are in love too.” ― William Shakespeare
This is the first thing I thought of when reading your poem! I still think you would be a fantastic lyricist!
This is the first thing I thought of when reading your poem! I still think you would be a fantastic lyricist!
15th Sep 2020 11:54pm
Thank you for your wonderful remarks! Shakespeare...wow! You're too kind.
As I have tried many times before to find someone to help me with the music for my song lyrics, I once again thought I had found that someone but failed. I found a guy on FB that claims to be both musician and music producer. He's even local. The problem is that I can't verify his claims. I couldn't find anything on the internet about him. That's why even though I have his phone number I'm hesitant to call him. On the other hand, I haven't completely given up on it.
As I have tried many times before to find someone to help me with the music for my song lyrics, I once again thought I had found that someone but failed. I found a guy on FB that claims to be both musician and music producer. He's even local. The problem is that I can't verify his claims. I couldn't find anything on the internet about him. That's why even though I have his phone number I'm hesitant to call him. On the other hand, I haven't completely given up on it.
16th Sep 2020 2:02pm
16th Sep 2020 2:10pm
23rd Sep 2020 5:01pm
Great writing, faith... It's beautiful and sweet. To answer your question - what's the difference? ❤️
23rd Sep 2020 5:06pm
Thank you for your wonderful remarks and the honor of being on your RL. Love or madness? They go together really well...lol!
