Immaculate

With you on his mind hows any man supposed to work or carry out any task.
They say when a mans cock goes hard, his brain goes dead.
Very true in my own opinion
Love and light
Ron xc

he says he has "miscellaneous pangs"  - that may lead to a limerick.

Your writing is always immaculate and just so hot as fuck. I might not comment on every poem, but I'll gladly admit that I read them all. Your preference is 'honest criticism'. (braver than most) I'm not educated or experienced enough to critique you within that constraint, and even if I were, there's no criticism for that which I feel is just perfect.
👌🏻
Ty for sharing,
I'm loving them all.
💜 💜 💜
🌠
B
🌠

I like your verses  
lots too.  We could form fan clubs
swapping on the bus

Smiles  

ahhhh squelching.... conjuring  mindless moments of shared pleasure...well done Natatlie

I did hesitate
but decided in the end
what the heck and squelched

That might be a good start for another poem - smiles - are you okay for me to play with your words to that effect?

What an erotic pull with a funny and alluring end. Each of your sexual poems is unique and grabs me in the cusp of heavenly concupiscence.

XoXoXo
John

squelch!