Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. Still. I'll begin
7th Sep 2020 7:11pm
always so tantalizing, titillating and surprising...delicious rhyming morsel....
1
Re: Re. Still. I'll begin
8th Sep 2020 00:07am
Re: Re. Still. I'll begin
8th Sep 2020 2:04am
Re: Re. Still. I'll begin
8th Sep 2020 8:24am
Re. Still. I'll begin
7th Sep 2020 7:41pm
now that is the way many may say
for me it is sweet to read the words are sure and true
for me it is sweet to read the words are sure and true
1
Re: Re. Still. I'll begin
8th Sep 2020 00:07am
Re. Still. I'll begin
7th Sep 2020 7:47pm
Oh writing blind, led my feelings and thoughts beyond our control
Strong piece, great write and so very relatable
Love and light
Ron x
Strong piece, great write and so very relatable
Love and light
Ron x
1
Re: Re. Still. I'll begin
8th Sep 2020 00:08am
Re: Re. Still. I'll begin
8th Sep 2020 00:09am
Re. Still. I'll begin
10th Sep 2020 9:20pm
Re: Re. Still. I'll begin
11th Sep 2020 5:56pm
Re. Still. I'll begin
25th Sep 2020 2:27am
This read like a letter to one far away but close in the memory of passion. There was a depth here that drew me in and kept me there in pleasure's cusp.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
0
Re: Re. Still. I'll begin
25th Sep 2020 10:55pm