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Hurt
I'm invisible
Despite all the people who walk by
Busy with their own lives
No second glances
All I can think about is you
And how a small misunderstanding
Turned into a million bad thoughts
But nothing worse than you hating me
Completely alone
Sitting in the dark
Wishing you knew the pain and hurt
That you are causing me
Despite all the people who walk by
Busy with their own lives
No second glances
All I can think about is you
And how a small misunderstanding
Turned into a million bad thoughts
But nothing worse than you hating me
Completely alone
Sitting in the dark
Wishing you knew the pain and hurt
That you are causing me
Published 3rd Sep 2020
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Anonymous
3rd Sep 2020 2:27am
Rain.. this is powerful.. in my RL it belongs.. nicely done..
Dave
Dave
3rd Sep 2020 2:27pm
3rd Sep 2020 2:49am
The one who hurts the most is always the one left behind. The other one is already onto bigger things. Sadly for you. Best get into another relationship quickly. Move on.
3rd Sep 2020 7:12am
perhaps people have an idea of the hurt which is why they inflict it - or do they just lash out?
18th Sep 2020 1:38am
I see you, marina *hugs* feel better soon. I'm sorry things went south for you. Keep up the expressive writing...!
16th Nov 2020 5:45am
The poem provides the insight to the reader of your emotions and pain.
Maybe this poem provides you a therapeutic outlet, which is good. My limited advice - don't isolate. Talk things out. If you were in the wrong, apologize. If they were expect one. My impression is you are a young lady, attractive and pretty bright. Everyone wants to be loved, but don't let in enslave you. I think you'll know what's right. If it doesn't feel right, move along.
Maybe this poem provides you a therapeutic outlet, which is good. My limited advice - don't isolate. Talk things out. If you were in the wrong, apologize. If they were expect one. My impression is you are a young lady, attractive and pretty bright. Everyone wants to be loved, but don't let in enslave you. I think you'll know what's right. If it doesn't feel right, move along.
