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Cherish~
Thimbleberry wine on lips
made divine by sweeping tongue
she glides inside your deepest thoughts
awakening in you a belief that it’s all possible
...her magic tastes like sunshine
An ache so inexplainable fills the well
of souls, forgotten long ago
decrepit screams are replaced by soulful moans
For lifetimes you have waited to taste the cherish
of her soul, rolling essence of; inside a parched mouth
succulence now moistens the very hunger you once felt
Nothing can be the same again
it has taken you to a cannibalistic frame of mind
always tapping the vein, wanting more
...like heat on ice; burn and weep
She dances in the rain and walks in the stars
tastes like the sweetest of wines
speaks the languages of two legged, four legged
and fae
...can you deny her?
Cherish~
made divine by sweeping tongue
she glides inside your deepest thoughts
awakening in you a belief that it’s all possible
...her magic tastes like sunshine
An ache so inexplainable fills the well
of souls, forgotten long ago
decrepit screams are replaced by soulful moans
For lifetimes you have waited to taste the cherish
of her soul, rolling essence of; inside a parched mouth
succulence now moistens the very hunger you once felt
Nothing can be the same again
it has taken you to a cannibalistic frame of mind
always tapping the vein, wanting more
...like heat on ice; burn and weep
She dances in the rain and walks in the stars
tastes like the sweetest of wines
speaks the languages of two legged, four legged
and fae
...can you deny her?
Cherish~
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29th Aug 2020 8:21am
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29th Aug 2020 9:24am
Love this ... so elegant ... excellent flow ... excellent closing lines ...
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Re. Cherish~
29th Aug 2020 5:46pm
I always enjoy your meandering poetry; it's a lovely walk through a nature forest, and despite the subject, always peaceful and resolved. Your confident aura permeates the content and shines forth.
Thank you for sharing. xo
One tiny piece of friendly feedback—
that it[ ' ]s all possible ( its should be possessive )
Thank you for sharing. xo
One tiny piece of friendly feedback—
that it[ ' ]s all possible ( its should be possessive )
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29th Aug 2020 5:47pm
Thank you. I always need assistance with grammar. I appreciate the kind words❣️
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Anonymous
29th Aug 2020 11:03pm
Tracey.. simply brilliant.. wonderful ink.. respect..
Dave
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2020 00:08am
Ooooo Lily......talking my wine language Lol! Seriously this is brilliant.......no I can’t wouldn’t deny the sexiness she brings in a lonely night......many thoughts on this.......RL for me........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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7th Oct 2020 2:52am
Lol I know what wine you like... winter white? Thank you for the great comment and RL❣️
Re. Cherish~
6th Oct 2020 3:58am
Dear T,
First of all, how did I miss this write? 🙄
Second of all, for me this was such a lovely pleasure having in my minds eye the freedom and innocence of enjoying the friend that doesn’t let convention get in the way of life’s more suffocating nonsense. The friend that says enjoy that wine and then let’s dance. Beautiful write. H🌷
First of all, how did I miss this write? 🙄
Second of all, for me this was such a lovely pleasure having in my minds eye the freedom and innocence of enjoying the friend that doesn’t let convention get in the way of life’s more suffocating nonsense. The friend that says enjoy that wine and then let’s dance. Beautiful write. H🌷
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