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beautiful day

her hair attractively
grey and overcast afternoon
I said as we each went our
way

Written by dartford

(Paul S...)

Published 25th Aug 2020

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Re. beautiful day

25th Aug 2020 1:02am

And away we go !

My best to the little woman, mate.

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25th Aug 2020 1:07am

and she says thank you ..

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Re. beautiful day

- Edited 25th Aug 2020 5:19pm

25th Aug 2020 5:17pm

Lovely piece of wordplay that is...
and put so economicaly
like showering togetherness...
thoughtful of you
I hazard to guess... h4u2 Ely

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Re. beautiful day

4th Sep 2020 00:09am

Brief hellos on the go.........away.

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