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Where Shadow Chases Light, Where Souls Know Bittersweet Delight
Where Shadow Chases Light,
Where I choose to take flight
Shadow solemn and deep in its humour
Chases after the flirting twirling light
Stern countenances banished
Baleful fires sparked to bright fireworks
Doom and gloom cast aside like new waste
Light smiling heels radiate dance
This is where I take a chance
New power forged in overcast forges
Metal souls of midnight-sun-shower-shine
Stronger Titanics rise from the brine
Oxymoron astronauts plant Utopian flags
While ungendered armies cast off rags
And riches, and all become something more.
Where shadow chases light
Holding out its balloon-light bouquet torch
While encloaked light daydreams on the porch
Just before their millisecond aeon-felt, dawn touch
Where all things become so multifacedly such.
Where Shadow Chases Light
Where Souls Know Bittersweet Delight.
Where I choose to take flight
Shadow solemn and deep in its humour
Chases after the flirting twirling light
Stern countenances banished
Baleful fires sparked to bright fireworks
Doom and gloom cast aside like new waste
Light smiling heels radiate dance
This is where I take a chance
New power forged in overcast forges
Metal souls of midnight-sun-shower-shine
Stronger Titanics rise from the brine
Oxymoron astronauts plant Utopian flags
While ungendered armies cast off rags
And riches, and all become something more.
Where shadow chases light
Holding out its balloon-light bouquet torch
While encloaked light daydreams on the porch
Just before their millisecond aeon-felt, dawn touch
Where all things become so multifacedly such.
Where Shadow Chases Light
Where Souls Know Bittersweet Delight.
Published 25th Jan 2012
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26th Jan 2012 11:47pm
some great language as per mr viddax.
I did struggle a little with the anarchic format and so forth.
i am guessing this was the desired effect.
still enjoyable.
Good stuff !
I did struggle a little with the anarchic format and so forth.
i am guessing this was the desired effect.
still enjoyable.
Good stuff !
28th Jan 2012 00:06am
The anarchic format was indeed on purpose and meant to turn all those dusty rigid ideas all topsy-turvy. Though next time when I write a similar poem I'll try to polish it better and make the meaning shine easier.
