Behold

A strong entry.  I particularly liked “bewitch those longing stares”

Thank you for your encouraging words.
Much appreciated

"divine domes" ... love ... wonderful tribute to "the girls" ... as I call them ... wonderful .... good luck ...

Thank you so much, sweet LDF😊

Great piece. About a great pair
Ron

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.  :)

The view from the Milkyway is awesome; thanks for allowing us to go... Peace. oral

Thank you for stopping by... Very much appreciate your comments...

What a stunning entry, Rohini! I love that you make everything so spiritual! xo

Oh, thank you so much, dear Ahavati.  I'm so glad that someone got the pulse of this piece.  Tbh, I was so hesitant in posting this poem... After much thought I posted it... I was doubtful if it would be well received given the fact that it's a very subtle erotica.
Thanks once again...and I'm so very honoured by the RL add.  😊🌷

Ah , yes , my friend :

To Be ( Or Not To Be )

And hold ;

Yet how can one hold , if not being ?

Yet if "behold" is the "seeing"

Then the feeling exists through eyes
and mind , not the physical perception...

Which you have captured in the otherworldly
nature of the bejeweled cupolas very well...

And to a babe in arms , suckling at the breast ,
are there not stars in the eyes of their galaxy ?

As the nipple said : is that not the point ?

Well Done !

( good fortune in the contest )

Thanks a bunch, dear poet  for gracing my page with your wonderful thoughts... Really liked how you dissected certain verses of my poem.  Very much appreciate you taking your time to read and share your views.

“bejeweled with cupolas enchanting”. Very nice imagery, well done.  I truly enjoyed this wonderful tribute to a pair of a woman’s amazing endowments.  Good luck.

I'm happy you picked up that line....😊
So glad you enjoyed this piece... Thanks a bunch! 😊

Great poem.  Keep on writing.

Thank you for your support, dear poet. 😊

You are wonderful with your words. Great ink, friend 😁

You are such a dear friend... Thank you so much for your continued kind support... I'm so honoured to see this piece in your reading list.  😊

Clever, sensuous, and flows like a dream ❤️ nicely done, InDreamz!

I'm so glad you liked it.  Thanks a lot for your kind comments n the RL add.  😊🌷

Hey, thanks a bunch for the kind words. So glad you liked this piece. 😊

Lovely picture painted of the breasts. Last few lines are a subtle poetic viagra to the male reader.

I'm really thankful to Case28 for holding this comp. It was fun writing this piece... I enjoyed the challenge... It did tickle my creative nerves.

Your way of expression is very wonderful, let the reader dive between the content of the words
Thank you for making me live this wonderful fantasy

Keep making us live your fantasies

Thank you so much, dear poet for such kind words. Glad you liked this piece.Truly appreciate you stopping by 🌹

There is no need to thank, because your poem is really wonderful,

That's so sweet of you 😊

The truth is that I liked your poem and also the way you write, that hidden feeling that tickles my feelings