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Forgotten
Always third
Never first
Rarely second
Never us
Always them
Then me
Afterthought
Oh, you forgot
Didn’t realize
I give up
We never were
Go to them
Never first
Rarely second
Never us
Always them
Then me
Afterthought
Oh, you forgot
Didn’t realize
I give up
We never were
Go to them
Published 13th Aug 2020
Author's Note
My perception of loneliness, written from a removed position in a triad. Perception isn't always reality. Written without edit or refinement deliberately.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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13th Aug 2020 5:10am
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13th Aug 2020 8:09am
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
13th Aug 2020 9:05am
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Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
13th Aug 2020 10:38am
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13th Aug 2020 3:30pm
This needs no edit nor refinement. It's excellent just as it is because it's a spoken truth from a heart without filter or remorse.
Well done.
Well done.
8th Jun 2021 2:09pm
