Just thinking 💭

Dang Lady, where did this come from, this is one short but fiery piece. Tight

Thank you. I’m happy you liked it☀️

This is fire.  Great little write-

Thank you Taffy I appreciate that❣️

Dear L,

Sizzling hot! Passionate with style and panache. I love your closing line. Playful twist. Well done and sexy write. H🌷

Thank you so much H💓✨. I’m glad you liked the twist😍

Thank you very much💫

Yes I am think of your crazy ways.  Keep on writing.

Thank you😉

'my lips move along your lay lines' - gets imagination going visualizing this, depending on where the lines are.

Will certainly get some male readers aching!

When I was here under my pen name I wrote sensual/passionate writes. I haven’t done it for awhile and it was a little fun. Thank you SS🥰

I love the sun-infused picture accompanying this poem, it has inspired me to write a poem in similar vein. It is evocative of intimacy in a similar way to the poster for the late 80s movie Wild Orchid (which shows Carrie Otis in profile in the sun with Mickey Rourke appearing to be about to make a move on her).

I can’t wait to read it💜

I have posted it today. I have reversed the linear kissing role.

Thank you BP... 😎

Whoa Lily......who could ever deny any of this sexy stuff.......you’ve caused me to hot flash.......in a good way......wheeeee.......steamy purple luv & hugs xo :)

Lol you’re so cute💜✨

A short but really sexy read.  I found it interesting how you went from primal needs/desires to seemingly total control in the final line

I have a tendency to do that. I guess as the passion rises so does the energy to control. Thank you for the read and for stopping by.

Wow,  I really like this.  Love how this fantastic piece ends!  Brilliant work!

Thank you I’m glad you liked it❣️

Wonderful poem...wow! Thanks for sharing your talent...look forward to more. Peace. oral

Thank you O... I appreciate you stopping by.

Call the fire department wow that was hot
Ron

Thank you🔥

My dear sweet lady go after what you want.  Keep on writing.

dear Tracy Leigh

i like this on the dimension
of how this could be a love poem written to a p0et's muse

a warm smile
silent lotus