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Breathing In Synch

when wrapped around you,
breathing in synch,
feeling your heart beat
I know what you think

I know that you know
we are just one
rising sensation
as we become

a rhythmic pulsation
in wave after wave,
bodies in motion,
a sensory rave

I am inside you
you are in me
both in our minds
and too physically

in cascading surges
of pleasure we find
whenever we are
naked, entwined

feeling your heart beat
breathing in synch...
when wrapped around you
I know what you think

Written by bcpoet

(Lawrence)

Published 2nd Aug 2020

Author's Note

Best listened to with headphones

#sensual

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Re. Breathing In Synch

DanielChristensen (The Fire Elemental)

3rd Aug 2020 2:48am

Your delivery is wonderful Lawrence. The write holds, what I feel is a very important quality. There is an essential disconnect between the sexual and intimate in our current aggrandized shock value media, which is flung about and sold daily. It would be wonderful to share this poem on the podcast, something of real value that would enrich our friends here to listen to and perhaps draw more interest in your work. If you are interested, please let me know.

In kindness,
Daniel