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Anticipation
As she thinks to herself in the dark her heart races ahead
a smile lurks on her face as she listens for movements
around her
The blindfold she wears is so dark and tight
matching the leather cuffs wrapping her wrists
the chains holding her hands over her head are soundless
but luckily not for long ...
Then Suddenly his hand spanks her hard …
The crack of his hand contacting her skin fills the room
not a single sound escapes from her lips
as she stands steady in her darkness
The room goes quiet and the touches disappear again
So she waits with eager anticipation
she can sense him
She knows he is close
she knows he is there and she waits for his touch
She Waits seemingly patient, yet voraciously anxious
As the thoughts and anticipation start to consume her mind
This awakening is what she craves
He spanks her once more then caresses her curves
as she shakes her head side to side her senses start to go wild
she wants more, both stings and tenderness
she sighs at his touch and she gasps at his strength
she cannot see or tell when he will touch or sting her again
yet every time it seems Total bliss is what she feels
she can't control herself a moan escapes from deep within her
She doesn’t have to see She just knows he has that devious smile
Adorns his face again
a smile lurks on her face as she listens for movements
around her
The blindfold she wears is so dark and tight
matching the leather cuffs wrapping her wrists
the chains holding her hands over her head are soundless
but luckily not for long ...
Then Suddenly his hand spanks her hard …
The crack of his hand contacting her skin fills the room
not a single sound escapes from her lips
as she stands steady in her darkness
The room goes quiet and the touches disappear again
So she waits with eager anticipation
she can sense him
She knows he is close
she knows he is there and she waits for his touch
She Waits seemingly patient, yet voraciously anxious
As the thoughts and anticipation start to consume her mind
This awakening is what she craves
He spanks her once more then caresses her curves
as she shakes her head side to side her senses start to go wild
she wants more, both stings and tenderness
she sighs at his touch and she gasps at his strength
she cannot see or tell when he will touch or sting her again
yet every time it seems Total bliss is what she feels
she can't control herself a moan escapes from deep within her
She doesn’t have to see She just knows he has that devious smile
Adorns his face again
Published 19th Jul 2020
| Edited 6th Sep 2023
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20th Jul 2020 3:53am
Oh my goodness! This is a beautiful look at an exchange between Don/Sub. Love it!
--B
--B
20th Jul 2020 3:58am
Thank you for your kind words
and thank you for taking the time to read my work
I am glad you enjoyed this piece
and thank you for taking the time to read my work
I am glad you enjoyed this piece
20th Jul 2020 5:13am
20th Jul 2020 8:04am
Thank You
I actually went into these last to with some hesitation on submitting them as i was not sure.
it is a lil different direction than my normal work, not subject wise, but form wise if that makes sense
Thank you for taking the time to stop by and read it, I am glad you enjoyed it
I actually went into these last to with some hesitation on submitting them as i was not sure.
it is a lil different direction than my normal work, not subject wise, but form wise if that makes sense
Thank you for taking the time to stop by and read it, I am glad you enjoyed it
20th Jul 2020 3:49pm
well it was very effective I don't usually like male erotics but this one was intense and very well written ❤
21st Jul 2020 3:12am
20th Jul 2020 3:58pm
Love the way your writing has blossomed, over time !
A finely crafted write filled with much rich detail... 😎
A finely crafted write filled with much rich detail... 😎
20th Jul 2020 9:53pm
The unknown heightens the experience within your poem and for the reader. The topic chosen and the choice of phrasing ensure we as a readers are almost as turned on as your poem's subject.
Kudos.
Loved it. My favorite theme
Kudos.
Loved it. My favorite theme
21st Jul 2020 8:19am
Thank you for your kind words, and taking the time to read this piece
I am glad you enjoyed it
I am glad you enjoyed it
