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twilight soul
I ache in twilight
the dusk settles upon my soul
and I keen inside the hollow places
somewhere in between destiny and fate
I've come to a place of knowing
I must get to know myself
I have nowhere else to go
I must face her, the inner me
shining bright, bleak and desolate
all pieces of the whole
little pieces scattered here and there
given to people for safekeeping
tears shed kept in a vial of memories
bidden forward I walk on into the future
with the understanding--
I've made my destinations right on time
met the souls I was to meet
kin to my spirit they become a part of me
within the sacred understanding
I am becoming
I am more me than I've ever been
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8th Jul 2020 1:11am
thank you for reading dearest poet I know I feel you... I deeply appreciate you sharing your thoughts ❤
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9th Jul 2020 9:29pm
thank you dearest Ron yes I think it takes a lifetime to fully know ourselves and to gain perspective on the bigger things... I deeply appreciate your thoughts 🌹
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8th Jul 2020 7:48pm
We all have tough times, sadly today my cat had to be out asleep it broke my heart, being paralyzed he's been my one solid feature in my life I'm gutted
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8th Jul 2020 10:16pm
Absolutely love this. Introspective self reflection at it's best. And the older stuff from Metallica is great (the new stuff not so much)
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9th Jul 2020 9:30pm
thank you graciously beautiful Kristina I deeply appreciate the love on this write 💕
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9th Jul 2020 2:17pm
Stunning verse crimsin, it really is a reflective and insightful piece we can identify with.
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9th Jul 2020 9:31pm
thank you graciously dearest Wally your comments are always so thoughtful I deeply appreciate you ❤
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10th Jul 2020 9:14pm
Beautiful piece, that's the journey I'm currently on. Working on myself. Great write!💗
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