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"What am I filling my lungs with?"
For years I've given you everything, so what have I been filling my lungs with if I've been giving you all my oxygen?
I've been giving you all my light just to make sure you never have to know what it's like to live in darkness.
I've been giving you all my light just to make sure you never have to know what it's like to live in darkness.
Published 7th Jul 2020
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7th Jul 2020 8:45pm
8th Jul 2020 9:15am
Dear M,
Each one of your poems is extraordinary. When the reader gets to the end there is a killer ending that drives the point of the piece to the heavens. It’s an amazing thing upon reflection when we give more than we receive only to realize we’ve been had instead of appreciated. Well written in pointing out that discrepancy. I wish you every opportunity for love, honor, and respect as well as equal balance of give and take. Great write. H🌷
Each one of your poems is extraordinary. When the reader gets to the end there is a killer ending that drives the point of the piece to the heavens. It’s an amazing thing upon reflection when we give more than we receive only to realize we’ve been had instead of appreciated. Well written in pointing out that discrepancy. I wish you every opportunity for love, honor, and respect as well as equal balance of give and take. Great write. H🌷
8th Jul 2020 8:44pm
Each one of your comments truly drives me to continue writing and sharing my stories and struggles. You always make me smile knowing I have listeners and those who continue to not only listen but enjoy and understand it all. <3 Thank you so much! <3
