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Evil Eye
The blue sees you
as your mind
goes green.
It's protecting
the unsuspecting
by projecting
the curse back
upon you.
Later, Dude.
as your mind
goes green.
It's protecting
the unsuspecting
by projecting
the curse back
upon you.
Later, Dude.
Published 3rd Jul 2020
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2020 1:30pm
Interesting use of colour here.
The blue and green obviously reflecting the colours of the eye here, but also reflecting the idea of sadness and jealousy in those colours.
I enjoyed the flippant ending. Felt quite sassy and I liked that about the write. I enjoyed this write for the karma value.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
The blue and green obviously reflecting the colours of the eye here, but also reflecting the idea of sadness and jealousy in those colours.
I enjoyed the flippant ending. Felt quite sassy and I liked that about the write. I enjoyed this write for the karma value.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
3rd Jul 2020 3:25pm
3rd Jul 2020 2:53pm
This is a solid verse. I have a HUGE Evil Eye on my front door! They really are mirrors projecting back into the soul of those who would harm. I have never seen one like yours; it's very intriguing.
3rd Jul 2020 3:27pm
This is actually an 18k eye necklace charm on a gold dipped pot leaf charm. I was digging around my jewelry box and just meshed them together.
Thank you!!!
Thank you!!!
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