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Love Laid Bare

Uncovers feelings that once did not exist    
Deep, as oceans are wide  
Wounds quick as lightening    
Empowers to reach untouchable peaks    

Harmonious as a singing bird    
Passionate    
Innocent    
Reveals subsurface beliefs    
   
A complicated labyrinth    
Mysterious    
Intimate    
A complex couples dance    
   
Intense as a storm approaching    
Hits harder than a bullet    
Confusing    
Ever changing
   
Jealousy suffocates like oil on water    
Intricate tiers of connection    
Soaring highs, lowest lows    
Hold tight to love bestowed.
Written by JOY (Joybell)
Published | Edited 3rd Jul 2020
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