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Unburden
Her past proclaimed
A free spirit, living on the edge
Future plans unknown
She thrives on surprise
Her present freedom
gifted by hard work
Resourceful, unwavering
Independence her next step
Her future uncharted
Surrendering control
Travels a simple life
Destiny, hers to unfold
A free spirit, living on the edge
Future plans unknown
She thrives on surprise
Her present freedom
gifted by hard work
Resourceful, unwavering
Independence her next step
Her future uncharted
Surrendering control
Travels a simple life
Destiny, hers to unfold
Published 21st Jun 2020
Author's Note
I was challenged to write a poem using these words with 30 min on the clock (Unknown, Untold, Surprise, Release, step, Simple life, on the edge, secure heart, free spirit, travel).
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22nd Jun 2020 3:48am
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23rd Jun 2020 6:31pm
1st Jan 2022 5:12am
You took this challenge successfully. I will take a challenge and write the poem.. This is very inspiring. It reflects everything is going.theougj uncertainty
Love. You.
KS
Love. You.
KS
12th Apr 2022 8:57am
Successful rise to that challenge, theme made more poignant by the picture showing walking away from chains.
