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My Universe
Give me a piece of your sky
Let me fly... high
Orbiting your stars
let me burn in those
scintillating eyes
Drizzle me
with soft glow
of your glittering sunbeams,
leaving me drenched
in golden dreams
Let me be your moon
circling around you
waxing and waning till I swoon
and melting into lovedrops
I fall for you
... into you
Soak me up
baby,
every atom of
mine
dissolve me
in your love divine
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Re. My Universe
17th Jun 2020 3:03pm
Re: Re. My Universe
Yes, indeed! The feeling is exhilarating.
Love leaves us dizzy n trippy with its intoxication. Making us want more n more...
Thanks a bunch, dear DC for adding this piece to your RL. Very much appreciated 😊
Love leaves us dizzy n trippy with its intoxication. Making us want more n more...
Thanks a bunch, dear DC for adding this piece to your RL. Very much appreciated 😊
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17th Jun 2020 4:30pm
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Re: Re. My Universe
17th Jun 2020 8:43pm
Thank you so much, dear poet, for the support. I very much appreciate the RL add. 😊
Re. My Universe
17th Jun 2020 4:49pm
Re: Re. My Universe
17th Jun 2020 8:44pm
Thanks for an encouraging feedback. Appreciate you dropping by. :)
and welcome to the Deep.
and welcome to the Deep.
Re. My Universe
17th Jun 2020 4:54pm
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17th Jun 2020 8:41pm
Re. My Universe
18th Jun 2020 1:14am
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18th Jun 2020 4:56am
Re. My Universe
19th Jun 2020 12:01pm
That was wonderful, InDreamz! 'Twas oozing with passion! I was tantalized and entranced by your ethereal imagery... this was such a sweet, and beautiful love poem! Thank you for sharing! I was excited to see a new poem from you, and was not disappointed! ❤️
Best wishes,
-NewB
Best wishes,
-NewB
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Re: Re. My Universe
19th Jun 2020 1:52pm
It's always a great pleasure to read your ever motivating and sweet comments, dear NB. I'm so happy that you enjoyed this spill.
Thanks for leaving a great review. I'm much honoured by the RL add. 😊🌷
Thanks for leaving a great review. I'm much honoured by the RL add. 😊🌷
Re: Re. My Universe
27th Jun 2020 3:28pm
Reading over this again this morning, and I'm left just as stunned as the last reading. You deserve the praise, as you're a really talented writer, and a beautiful, passionate soul ❤️
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Re: Re. My Universe
27th Jun 2020 7:57pm
I dunno how to thank you,dear NB for being such a great supporter and motivator. You are a gem of a person....
and yes, the feeling n thoughts are mutual 😊🌷
and yes, the feeling n thoughts are mutual 😊🌷
Re. My Universe
22nd Jun 2020 12:08pm
Re. My Universe
28th Jun 2020 9:55pm
Re: Re. My Universe
28th Jun 2020 9:58pm
Thank you, dear poet, for your sweet comment. Very much appreciate your visit. :)
Re. My Universe
22nd Jul 2020 1:32pm
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22nd Jul 2020 1:45pm
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27th Jul 2020 9:11pm
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Re: Re. My Universe
27th Jul 2020 9:13pm
Re. My Universe
6th Aug 2020 11:03pm
This is such a beautiful piece, the flow is wonderful and the imagery was celestial. You are much too hard on yourself if you feel you are clumsy with words. Your tongue drips with honey, keep writing!!
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
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Re: Re. My Universe
6th Aug 2020 11:09pm
I'm so flattered by your wonderful feedback. Thanks a lot, dear poet for gracing my page with your presence.
It's an honour to have this piece on your reading list. 😊
It's an honour to have this piece on your reading list. 😊
Re. My Universe
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2020 8:23am
Beautiful metaphors, I love the opening lines and the way the poem progresses.:)
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23rd Aug 2020 8:26am
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11th Dec 2020 5:19pm
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11th Dec 2020 5:31pm
Re. My Universe
30th Mar 2022 3:19pm
Re: Re. My Universe
30th Mar 2022 3:24pm
I'm reading all your poems....where is this amazing beautiful writer of erotica now? What happened?
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