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Into Your Smile I Call Home
Coming down the home stretch
2 weeks on the road
Makes the strongest man
Bend at the knees a bit
200 miles to your loving arms
Black coffee, petal to the metal
Till I round the corner
Into your smile I call home
2 weeks on the road
Makes the strongest man
Bend at the knees a bit
200 miles to your loving arms
Black coffee, petal to the metal
Till I round the corner
Into your smile I call home
Published 12th Jun 2020
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12th Jun 2020 1:56am
Kind of a cowboy write
Working all week on the road and then a couple days off to go home to his woman
I’m writing in characters again ....
Thx Daisy
Working all week on the road and then a couple days off to go home to his woman
I’m writing in characters again ....
Thx Daisy
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2020 6:42pm
Great words, I know the pain, and then meeting the one you love, the one that you couldn't because of the distance. It captured it all.
12th Jun 2020 7:12pm
18th Jun 2020 3:54pm
This is the stuff that makes all the pain and challenges worth the reward.
Beautiful piece sir.
Beautiful piece sir.
18th Jun 2020 4:16pm
I wrote this about 5 years ago and tweaked it a bit now. It’s one of my favorite offerings in my poem journey so glad to get your high praise !
Thanks Wally
Thanks Wally
