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morality
“Therefore to him that knoweth to do good, and doeth it not,
to him it is sin.” James 4:17 KJV
amorality:
caring not
whether you rise
or whether you rot
i yield to zero compromise
immorality:
making sure
down in the dirt
you merit no cure
i heap contempt upon your hurt
morality:
when your heart
trembles in fear
it tears me apart
to see you in pain so severe
© Copyright 2020 June 10
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
to him it is sin.” James 4:17 KJV
amorality:
caring not
whether you rise
or whether you rot
i yield to zero compromise
immorality:
making sure
down in the dirt
you merit no cure
i heap contempt upon your hurt
morality:
when your heart
trembles in fear
it tears me apart
to see you in pain so severe
© Copyright 2020 June 10
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 10th Jun 2020
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10th Jun 2020 11:21pm
For me,
Your last stanza sounds a lot like an explanation for empathy
Love the structure and graphics - very easy on aged eyes
Your last stanza sounds a lot like an explanation for empathy
Love the structure and graphics - very easy on aged eyes
11th Jun 2020 4:53pm
Hey, Brother!
Hearing you for the first time in over 60 days is a morning wind on sunlit mountains. I will call it the DE-extinction (or the distinction) of Tallen. Welcome back.
My trilogy has only two distinctions, because amorality (turning a blind eye) is passive consent (as in Floyd's strangulation) -- and to him that knows to do good and does it not...
On the other hand, your observation is spot-on truthful with regard to empathy because a lack of compassion fills the bucket of immorality as much as empathy drains it dry.
Thanks for the kudos.
Sincerely
cab
Hearing you for the first time in over 60 days is a morning wind on sunlit mountains. I will call it the DE-extinction (or the distinction) of Tallen. Welcome back.
My trilogy has only two distinctions, because amorality (turning a blind eye) is passive consent (as in Floyd's strangulation) -- and to him that knows to do good and does it not...
On the other hand, your observation is spot-on truthful with regard to empathy because a lack of compassion fills the bucket of immorality as much as empathy drains it dry.
Thanks for the kudos.
Sincerely
cab
11th Jun 2020 00:51am
11th Jun 2020 5:24pm
Thank you, Kp!
I will gather all the tears into my tear bottles:
tears for the souls of black folk (W.E.B. Du Bois, 1903);
tears for the souls of empathetic white souls (John Howard Griffin, 1961);
tears for black souls who know not that they are enslavers of love (Angela Thompsell, 2018);
tears for white folk who know not that they are enslavers of hate (Paul Craig Roberts, 2019).
My own tears are in there too -- and now yours...
Thanks.
cab
I will gather all the tears into my tear bottles:
tears for the souls of black folk (W.E.B. Du Bois, 1903);
tears for the souls of empathetic white souls (John Howard Griffin, 1961);
tears for black souls who know not that they are enslavers of love (Angela Thompsell, 2018);
tears for white folk who know not that they are enslavers of hate (Paul Craig Roberts, 2019).
My own tears are in there too -- and now yours...
Thanks.
cab
