Stormy Velour

I WILL Follow you into the storm
TO KEEP YOU VERY WARM

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Come on baby, the storm clouds are brewing now, bring that 'lil dragonfly with you!🔥

Wow!  This is fantabulous!  I just checked the comp rules... and man,  your erotica has blown me away...i love how you have woven the intense passion of love and lust in such a subtle way.... I'm really impressed....
Kudos to you for such a clever and exquisite work 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Thank you so much. I love writing metaphors, they're probably my favorite tool. However, I wasn't too pleased with it after I posted & submitted. I'm gracious for the kindness & add to let me know you saw something I didn't. 🙏💖

Now that's a downpour I'd love to be caught in. You could be my THUNDER BUDDY. loved it

Tickled pink & giggling, Ron. I appreciate your read  along with friendly banter and candid commentary. You're a welcome presence!⚡💦

Thank you, I'm not very educated and dont know many big words, sadly I have no filter either so you get whatever I'm thinking. So if I say something be sure I mean it.
Love your stuff x

And this is our Queen! No chances for us the tiny rain drops :) Amazing ink as always Dear Pandora!

Thank you for the awesome praise, sweetums, but we are ALL Queens in our own unique way!💝

I'm glad you saw something as i wasn't too pleased after my submission, but what the hell.;)

you struck the true lines of mankind periceing the mind and heart if young and old

awesome

Ever gracious of your thoughts always, sweet D!💖

I need a list just for yours, I swear. Sensual, delectable and just plain gorgeous...sigh

Omgoodness, I cringed after my submission. I love metaphors, but this one just seems to fall flat to me. I'm pleased you saw something & i think the same of your work. I'm catching up with it whenever possible. That limit is complete bs!🌺💞

Beautiful cool entry, gorgeous! Wonderful metaphors and super sensual - I’m standing over here in the jelly aisle and I’m taking her from the shelf and adding her to ma’list!! 😁

Bravo!

Xoxo Taryn

I thank you dearly, but THIS is the one I was mentioning by text about being an utter mess. A second dose of love sent your way today.💞🌼

Gosh, you are such a fantastic writer... I'm absolutely blown away by your recent writings... My goodness, you are so talented, Pandy. This was decadent ❤️😊

Best of luck in the comp 🌹🙏

A very late and super thank you, NB. After posting it, I realized how terrible it was.🙈 I'm so surprised anything was likeable so I'm gracious of your wonderful comment & add.💗

aaaaaaaaaaah, now another reason for me waiting for the 1st Monsoon of 2020!!
so so SO good!!
The metaphors are eeeeeeexquisite!!   Had me thinking about sweating!

Wonderful spill

A very late thank you for finding something read worthy, much less RL add worthy. Sending hugs your way, Tallen. I hope all is well in your world, dear soul.💜

Such a sensual storm!   Even clinging to my old  familiar boughs didn't stop me from being swept away by the tantalising torrents of your pen.  Even the "white thundering  rage"  engulfed me... a climatic surge of  magnitude.
Excellent  writing Pandy!!  

Thank you David. As said already, this way terrible imo. I repeated "As if" starting off two sentences and you know how i hate that. Your other commentary was more colorful when i only used the last stanza "over there"..you may not have realized my trickery, but it was the only good part, imo.

Look at you go.  These delights are just spilling from you.  So glad I stepped into your domain to see what wonders you've been creating.

This. Was. God. Awful, dearest T...🙈


......but thank you. Any time to see you around is a good one.

Sensuality and storms were never mated with such poetic majesty than in your rendering of words. The imagery grabbed me and laid its thrust upon me as I felt your womanly tide engulf me. Words crashed like waves as I surfed them to an interalized climax.

XoXoXo
John

Omgoodness what a review, John. I immediately hung my head in shame after posting it, but said what the hell & left it. The fact you read anything even add worthy has me astonished, but you know I take your praise like butter on bread, my intellectual friend.

This poem beautifully captures the tumultuous yet mesmerizing essence of a storm, both in its physical manifestation and its metaphorical significance. The imagery is vivid and evocative, painting a picture of two individuals navigating through the tempest together, finding solace and strength in each other's presence.

The use of sensory details, such as the "crisp flicker and flash" of lightning and the "musked petrichor of pearlescent rain," adds depth to the experience, immersing the reader in the scene. The contrast between the chaos of the storm and the intimacy of the embrace creates a poignant tension, highlighting the resilience and vulnerability inherent in human connection.

Overall, this poem is a captivating exploration of love, companionship, and resilience in the face of adversity. The language is rich and lyrical, inviting readers to journey alongside the speaker through the storm and emerge on the other side, strengthened by the experience.