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Barb Wire Bitch
That’s what I call her
She’s calling the shots
I don’t get in the way
Badass all the way
Kill or be killed she says
Rocks me all night long
Bukowski smiling from the heavens
That bitch carries it
She’s calling the shots
I don’t get in the way
Badass all the way
Kill or be killed she says
Rocks me all night long
Bukowski smiling from the heavens
That bitch carries it
Author's Note
I like a woman who can squash a beer can with her twat
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Re. Barb Wire Bitch
5th Jun 2020 3:27pm
This chick terrifies me... and all those reads with no comments, clearly I’m not the only one. Rendered speechless by her intensity, I presume.
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5th Jun 2020 3:36pm
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5th Jun 2020 3:51pm
Maybe it’s the authors note... all I kept thinking was, damn how big is that thing then? What the hell else does she put in there...
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5th Jun 2020 4:30pm
Well, I'm not sure about the storage capacity but talent is talent, you know ????
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2020 4:30pm
The author's note wraps this up in a skilled bow made from interlocked metal - gave me big smiles this morning.
Strategic pressure and placement like
xXx
- T
Strategic pressure and placement like
xXx
- T
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5th Jun 2020 4:32pm
Re. Barb Wire Bitch
5th Jun 2020 4:52pm
She doesn't terrify me ... makes me want to ... pick my finger ... taking it off ... nice job PS ...
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5th Jun 2020 4:59pm
Re. Barb Wire Bitch
5th Jun 2020 6:02pm
You talking about me again....~blushes~ Love this, you and her PS! <3
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5th Jun 2020 6:11pm
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2020 8:26pm
Well she is going to my Bday for sure!! ;)
Great piece!!!
Great piece!!!
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5th Jun 2020 8:49pm
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8th Jun 2020 00:00am
Absolutely!
💯 percent mine as well. He's taught this girl a lot....
https://youtu.be/qb07yIAKyuQ
💯 percent mine as well. He's taught this girl a lot....
https://youtu.be/qb07yIAKyuQ
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