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“Done.”
It is over.
I am done with you.
In so many ways.
You lied to me
You hurt me
You wasted all my days.
No calls and no shows.
You broke promises and my heart.
I still forgave you every time
I thought our love was off the chart.
But I was played
Like a record
Over and over again.
Now that I think of it
You hurt me so many times
I guess you were never even really my friend.
Cuz with a friend like you
Who needs enemies?
Who needs all the grief?
You gave me your heart when it was convenient for you
But your love was fleeting
It was brief.
You took time away from my daughter
And it never even crossed your mind
Well I’m done wasting nights away from her with you.
I’m not gonna leave my child behind.
You shut me out
You ghost me
Then you call like everything’s ok
Well it’s not
You fucked up, bro.
But that’s cool
See, I ain’t Burger King, you can’t have it your way.
You probably got your car fixed
So you don’t need me anymore.
Don’t be surprised when you come knocking
And I don’t answer my door.
I’m done being your 7-11.
Open all fucking night.
It’s your turn to be without me.
And you know what, it serves you right.
I won’t reply to your messages
Now you can see how it feels
You think you can run game on me
Shit, you think you got skills?
Hahaha you’re old, son.
You’re a has-been.
That never was.
You can keep your old skanky meth-whore “friend.“
If that’s what you want, go get her, cuz.
I was always out of your league.
I deserve better than you.
Of all the times I’ve said it
This time I mean it
I’m. Done. Slummin.
WE ARE THROUGH.
I am done with you.
In so many ways.
You lied to me
You hurt me
You wasted all my days.
No calls and no shows.
You broke promises and my heart.
I still forgave you every time
I thought our love was off the chart.
But I was played
Like a record
Over and over again.
Now that I think of it
You hurt me so many times
I guess you were never even really my friend.
Cuz with a friend like you
Who needs enemies?
Who needs all the grief?
You gave me your heart when it was convenient for you
But your love was fleeting
It was brief.
You took time away from my daughter
And it never even crossed your mind
Well I’m done wasting nights away from her with you.
I’m not gonna leave my child behind.
You shut me out
You ghost me
Then you call like everything’s ok
Well it’s not
You fucked up, bro.
But that’s cool
See, I ain’t Burger King, you can’t have it your way.
You probably got your car fixed
So you don’t need me anymore.
Don’t be surprised when you come knocking
And I don’t answer my door.
I’m done being your 7-11.
Open all fucking night.
It’s your turn to be without me.
And you know what, it serves you right.
I won’t reply to your messages
Now you can see how it feels
You think you can run game on me
Shit, you think you got skills?
Hahaha you’re old, son.
You’re a has-been.
That never was.
You can keep your old skanky meth-whore “friend.“
If that’s what you want, go get her, cuz.
I was always out of your league.
I deserve better than you.
Of all the times I’ve said it
This time I mean it
I’m. Done. Slummin.
WE ARE THROUGH.
Author's Note
A person can only take so much indifference and neglect. And I couldn’t love enough for the both of us. And he couldn’t love at all..........
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Re. “Done.”
1st Jun 2020 1:55am
Love it!!! My soul sister right here! I’m done slummin too, fuck ‘em. Don’t know a good thing until it’s gone....
Also, the “meth”’ whores are no joke....
Cheers 🥂 🍻 to finding men with bigger balls!
Also, the “meth”’ whores are no joke....
Cheers 🥂 🍻 to finding men with bigger balls!
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1st Jun 2020 5:37pm
If your name is “Jerri Ann” and you drive a truck bigger than my step-dad’s — you might be a meth whore.
Sorry. Had to.
Girl. He would always say he’s going to help “Jerri” do this and “Jerri” do that.
Snake.
Sorry. Had to.
Girl. He would always say he’s going to help “Jerri” do this and “Jerri” do that.
Snake.
Re: Re. “Done.”
1st Jun 2020 5:43pm
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1st Jun 2020 6:22pm
If you rail thin, weighing about 115 pounds soaking wet, with almost no curves, looking like a prepubescent boy with caked on makeup... you might be a meth whore. Listen hun, no amount of makeup will hide that fact you’ve been up for 6 days straight...
There’s always a Jerri. And I’m sure we all know what he was helping her with...
There’s always a Jerri. And I’m sure we all know what he was helping her with...
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Re. “Done.”
1st Jun 2020 6:04am
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1st Jun 2020 5:38pm
Re. “Done.”
1st Jun 2020 9:19am
Love this. It's so fire. "You’re a has-been.
That never was." I like that this isn't just a sad breakup poem, it also has lines like that which hit. Wonderful.
That never was." I like that this isn't just a sad breakup poem, it also has lines like that which hit. Wonderful.
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Re: Re. “Done.”
1st Jun 2020 5:39pm
I know there’s some clichè shit, but fuck it. That’s what I was feeling at the time. I had to dumb it down for him so he could understand. “Burger King, 7-11...”
God help me.
🤣🤣😘
God help me.
🤣🤣😘
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1st Jun 2020 6:18pm
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1st Jun 2020 8:31pm
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1st Jun 2020 9:47pm
Exactly! No wonder they never understand me...
We really should put all this together in a poem!
We really should put all this together in a poem!
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Re: Re. “Done.”
2nd Jun 2020 2:34pm
Bwahahahahahaaaa!!!!!!
“It............slow...........”
(Couldn’t help myself.)
Derp!
“It............slow...........”
(Couldn’t help myself.)
Derp!
Re: Re. “Done.”
2nd Jun 2020 2:34pm
Re. “Done.”
2nd Jun 2020 1:01pm
Powerful and insightful piece raw and uncut truth when it pertains to the mere heart of the human soul and mind...respect dear poetess
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2nd Jun 2020 2:35pm
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6th Jun 2020 11:29am
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6th Jun 2020 1:52pm
Re. “Done.”
2nd Jun 2020 2:01pm
You will need time to heal and rediscover yourself until your ready to find the right one to give your heart to.
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Re: Re. “Done.”
2nd Jun 2020 2:37pm
Thank you. Yes. How much time?! I know there’s no specific answer, because heartache affects each of us differently, so the time differs for each person.
❤️
❤️
Re: Re. “Done.”
2nd Jun 2020 3:00pm
Yes exactly. The most important thing is to first heal yourself. Not allow The bad of the past relationships to carry over into new relationships. But let what you learned from them to help you understand and grows want you liked and disliked to help in what you do and don’t want and what your looking for. Too many people don’t grow from the pain of past relationships. The past relationships become attached to the new ones and so on and so on.
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Re: Re. “Done.”
6th Jun 2020 11:30am
You know what. You’re so right. Taking the bad with the good sometimes isn’t the smartest thing, not if you’re in a new relationship. Leave the bad behind! You’re right, though. Baggage means something totally different to me now. Thanks!
Re. “Done.”
6th Jun 2020 2:21pm
Know your worth. Once you do, you won’t tolerate asshats that steal your peace.
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6th Jun 2020 2:24pm