My Fantasy...

What a fantasy indeed.  You had me chuckling nervously whilst reading.  Great poem.

Thank ya thank ya, kindly.:)

God damn.

I'll take that as a compliment.;) Thank you for reading;)

...baby you worked this situation in fashion.. you hot gir.. keep it up LL.. 8^/ Peppz

Thank you man. I'm happy to know your thoughts;)

Very Hot. You set the scene and drew me in. The pace and intensity increased as you went along and whereas the early lines are longer with some unobtrusive rhyme integrating the flow, the latter lines are short, like panicked breath ....
Damn! I wish I still smoked cigars!   R.

Thanks man for reading and im glad u liked;)

str8 off da top of my head
me u a table da dresser da couch & bed
dam girl...i almost 4got da floor
dats where anything goes bcuz im ur man whore
jus put da pussy on my face
i wil try 2 put my tongue 2 da bac of ur waist
& wen u think u hav taken all dat u can
i wil put ur ankels by ur head so undastand
dat my plan is 2 take u far beyond pleasures peak
not only am i goodest boo but im da freak magnifeek....;)

Look baby im here ready to spread
My legs for only u, nuff said
And when we take it to tha bed
Best believe ima ride ya face
And u'll be holdin my hips to keep me in place
I'll neva b able to get enuff
And when it's time to stuff
That loooog piece of meat
Into my honeyed heat
Youve definitely earned the title, Freak Magnifeek!

wel i dont mean 2 sound retarded
but im bout redy 2 get it started
& make dat pussy sound jus like u farted
den grab da blunt & spark it....;)

That's one thing you'll never be able to do
Is sound retarded, boo
And when i'm ready for u
To hit it doggy style
All you'll wana do is smile...;)

wel dam im smilen now
i really wish u cud c jus how
& giv u mor kisses dan u can take
jus 4 ur pleasures sake
jus so dat i can reminise
of a memory not 2 b missed
rite here unda dis ga sun
or n nc where i wil hav u wooooo-in like ric flair & beyond.....lol

I must say this is my favorite of your poems I have read. Keep at it ;)