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Spin Cycle
A Repost From 2013
Looking so sexy
in her little black dress
when he gets home
they’re going downtown
for a candle-lit dinner
and dancing till dawn
They’ve almost achieved
their welcome escape
when life intervenes
a soapy stream rushes
beneath the laundry door
from a broken washing machine
They exchange
candles and fine dining
for a mop and a bucket
rather than gliding
across the dance floor
they tip-toe through
the sudsy wet mess
What can be done
to salvage their evening?
and their unwashed clothing
that rest in a damp pile
she goes to the kitchen
retrieving wine, fruit and cheese
puts all in a basket
and grabs the car keys
They find a secluded corner
in the brightly lit laundromat
he watches her
put the coins in the slot
finally noticing
that she really looks hot
Catching his gaze
she mischievously says
do you want to get dirty
while the clothes get clean?
reaching under her skirt
to slip them off
she tosses him her panties
he inhales deeply their scent
and throws them into the machine
He pulls her close
voraciously they kiss
while swaying to the beat
of the agitator
his throbbing growth
presses her stomach
she lets down her dress
exposing her breasts
she won’t let his suck
linger too long on each
She turns and leans
onto the machine
her nipples stiffen
as they graze the cold lid
lifting her skirt
he thrusts forward
probing her deepest desire
He moves in and out
mimicking the rhythm
of the pulsating machine
they cry out
with orgasmic joy
as the rinse cycle begins
She stops the machine
he asks why when
they hadn’t reached spin
she inserts more coins
oh they need to wash again
This time
you can eat first
Looking so sexy
in her little black dress
when he gets home
they’re going downtown
for a candle-lit dinner
and dancing till dawn
They’ve almost achieved
their welcome escape
when life intervenes
a soapy stream rushes
beneath the laundry door
from a broken washing machine
They exchange
candles and fine dining
for a mop and a bucket
rather than gliding
across the dance floor
they tip-toe through
the sudsy wet mess
What can be done
to salvage their evening?
and their unwashed clothing
that rest in a damp pile
she goes to the kitchen
retrieving wine, fruit and cheese
puts all in a basket
and grabs the car keys
They find a secluded corner
in the brightly lit laundromat
he watches her
put the coins in the slot
finally noticing
that she really looks hot
Catching his gaze
she mischievously says
do you want to get dirty
while the clothes get clean?
reaching under her skirt
to slip them off
she tosses him her panties
he inhales deeply their scent
and throws them into the machine
He pulls her close
voraciously they kiss
while swaying to the beat
of the agitator
his throbbing growth
presses her stomach
she lets down her dress
exposing her breasts
she won’t let his suck
linger too long on each
She turns and leans
onto the machine
her nipples stiffen
as they graze the cold lid
lifting her skirt
he thrusts forward
probing her deepest desire
He moves in and out
mimicking the rhythm
of the pulsating machine
they cry out
with orgasmic joy
as the rinse cycle begins
She stops the machine
he asks why when
they hadn’t reached spin
she inserts more coins
oh they need to wash again
This time
you can eat first
Published 25th May 2020
Author's Note
Getting ready to do my laundry today evoked memories of this saucy piece I wrote in October of 2013. Enjoy!
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25th May 2020 8:07pm
Wondered if that could be read to some background music from Wagner's 'RING Cycle'?
26th May 2020 8:43pm
Ha ha! Perhaps I'll try. The woman can gain lots of weight and wear a two-horned viking helmet...a cos-play erotic scene.
26th May 2020 7:29am
26th May 2020 8:41pm
Thank you Soledad❣❣ I enjoyed writing this one because I can easily imagine such a calamity occurring in our home. However, the laundromat scene is purely a pipe-dream.😘
26th May 2020 9:13am
i would love to ride on that spin cycle .. starting with the wine, fruits and cheese and getting the car keys
26th May 2020 8:46pm
Thank you so much Xiao! I like that you incorporated the food preparation and car key grab in the spin-cycle.
26th May 2020 9:19pm
I just grabbed a basket and heading to the laundromat. Fun, sexy and witty write.
26th May 2020 9:44pm
Thank you so much Davinci! I am very pleased that you saw the fun and wit in the piece I was hoping those elements would be recognized in the piece as well as the sexiness of course 😃🙏
26th May 2020 11:56pm
27th May 2020 4:38pm
Thank you so much Steveny❣❣ I love to tell stories and this was fun to write ans I think I kept the loving tasteful;l and somewhat humorous.
28th May 2020 5:38pm
28th May 2020 7:53pm
Loved this! The quintessential writer's talent to surprise the reader with unexpected twists and turns. You do this wonderfully here. Though the title indicated the nature of where this was going how you got there was a surprise. And I must say this was filled with the Joie de vivre of life. This was pure sunshine from heaven.
John
John
25th Jul 2020 9:11pm
John, your comments bring me joy! You seem to connect so well to my thought processes while writing the poems and prose. I truly appreciate you encouraging comments.
Cheers!
Cheers!
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