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Fake smile
It was a chilly morning with a light breeze, when it brushed my cheek; for a split second I swear I could feel my cheeks freeze over like snow melting on a winters day. I stared up at the rainbow of colors breaking through the horizon, filling the blue sky with its wonderful rays. I remember thinking about everything; Everything I hated about the world. I hated how the birds chirped as if this wretched place were peaceful!
Published 23rd May 2020
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Oh dear! I always thought people took comfort & solace in rainbows & chirping birds. Now I know differently.
Personally, I find peace in nature, even though it's all around us while we suffer. The birds & the rainbows will continue to do what they do cos they don't know any different. They just do what they do.
Personally, I find peace in nature, even though it's all around us while we suffer. The birds & the rainbows will continue to do what they do cos they don't know any different. They just do what they do.
24th May 2020 5:15am
This poem was written the day after a painful event in my life. I normally do find peace and comfort in nature.
24th May 2020 6:47am
"remember thinking about everything; Everything I hated about the world." I love that line. So powerful, but also I relate to that at times. A perfect day but with wreaked emotions. Great ink.
11th Jun 2020 6:00pm
Lol I feel the anger in this a beautiful scene but a mind that wanta to shout fuck off
12th Jun 2020 1:16am
