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Remember the Time You Became an Asshole?
I cared for you
not like lovers do
just two people
down for each other
seemed everything was cool
but you kept struggling to understand
what being a decent person was
guess you couldn't get the concept
a little time and care
could of made you somewhat likeable
it's ok to be human, you know?
but it turns out
you ended up
like throwup in my mouth
remember the time you became an asshole?
yeah, yeah
such a shame
I really thought you had potential
a friend lost
a friend dead
speaking truth at your eulogy
don't be a dick
seems like such a simple ah thing
but you couldn't help it
always talking at me with attitude
you don't even know what you're mad at
get a grip
shit ain't that serious
c'mon, give me a break
not everyone is your enemy
won't pick up the phone when I call
guess I should be moving on
but I know when you'll be needing things
you'll come back at me like a boomerang
remember the time you became an asshole?
yeah, yeah
I asked you how your day was
all I got was silence
walked off as if you were
the ruler of the whole damn universe
must of been that new money
you spend cash like you earned it
dressed up like you're selling something
well bitch! I ain't buying
when sweet fruit goes bad
I drop that shit in the trash
no second thoughts
never looking back
not like lovers do
just two people
down for each other
seemed everything was cool
but you kept struggling to understand
what being a decent person was
guess you couldn't get the concept
a little time and care
could of made you somewhat likeable
it's ok to be human, you know?
but it turns out
you ended up
like throwup in my mouth
remember the time you became an asshole?
yeah, yeah
such a shame
I really thought you had potential
a friend lost
a friend dead
speaking truth at your eulogy
don't be a dick
seems like such a simple ah thing
but you couldn't help it
always talking at me with attitude
you don't even know what you're mad at
get a grip
shit ain't that serious
c'mon, give me a break
not everyone is your enemy
won't pick up the phone when I call
guess I should be moving on
but I know when you'll be needing things
you'll come back at me like a boomerang
remember the time you became an asshole?
yeah, yeah
I asked you how your day was
all I got was silence
walked off as if you were
the ruler of the whole damn universe
must of been that new money
you spend cash like you earned it
dressed up like you're selling something
well bitch! I ain't buying
when sweet fruit goes bad
I drop that shit in the trash
no second thoughts
never looking back
Published 18th May 2020
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18th May 2020 11:22am
It's better to prefer one's own company rather than be with an Asshole... I have pulled out a lotta weeds outta my life.
Great write!
Great write!
18th May 2020 11:26am
For sure. Some people aren't worth the time. Thank you very much for the read 😁
18th May 2020 11:47am
18th May 2020 6:47pm
18th May 2020 11:56am
Real talk straight up on the rocks some folks just refuse to understand wholeheartedly that you don't believe in wasteing your time with mind games nicely composed brother...respect
18th May 2020 6:48pm
I usually bite my tongue. That's what I love about poetry. Say what I feel then move on. Much appreciate the read 😁
19th May 2020 9:44am
Exactly I am the same way I say what needs to be said then am done I don't do debates drop the knowledge and wisdom and move on respect brother poet
18th May 2020 2:32pm
When one chapter closes, another commences; sorry you didn’t make it to the next one ! I’m sure you’re both better off without one another as you seem somewhat aggravated by the said person’s success.
Hating on someone who works hard, and has shit to show for their hard work says more about you, than the anyone else.
I guess... trash is trash; and that’s your opinion.
I think it’s fair to say that from reading you over the years, that you’re a self confessed arsehole who’s hardly qualified to determine ones decency.
Hmm. People in glass houses and all !
Oft, what we abhor in a person is a direct reflection of something much deeper within our own selves that we’re unable to accept.
Peace be unto you... xo
Hating on someone who works hard, and has shit to show for their hard work says more about you, than the anyone else.
I guess... trash is trash; and that’s your opinion.
I think it’s fair to say that from reading you over the years, that you’re a self confessed arsehole who’s hardly qualified to determine ones decency.
Hmm. People in glass houses and all !
Oft, what we abhor in a person is a direct reflection of something much deeper within our own selves that we’re unable to accept.
Peace be unto you... xo
18th May 2020 6:52pm
We are many things as human. We are good, bad, assholes. I just don't hide those feelings in my writes. More so in person I just bite my tongue. No sense fighting with nonsense.
18th May 2020 9:10pm
wow. Very intense. My favorite line is "it's ok to be human, you know? But it turns out you ended up like throwup in my mouth."
I felt this. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing!
<3 TrueLover
I felt this. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing!
<3 TrueLover
19th May 2020 2:54pm
6th Jun 2020 6:03pm
Um. Fuck. Yes.
I needed this today. Good God, I needed this today! I’m gonna make this a song. (In my head)
“Yah yah”
You’re all nonchalant until the end, and it’s like that chef guy, the Italian one that says “Bam!” You’re like THAT guy on meth like “BAM BITCH KICK ROCKS!”
Hahaha. Yah yah I fucking love it.
Thank you. So much. 🤟🏽
I needed this today. Good God, I needed this today! I’m gonna make this a song. (In my head)
“Yah yah”
You’re all nonchalant until the end, and it’s like that chef guy, the Italian one that says “Bam!” You’re like THAT guy on meth like “BAM BITCH KICK ROCKS!”
Hahaha. Yah yah I fucking love it.
Thank you. So much. 🤟🏽
