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Hourglass of her future
The painting blurred
Hanging unpolished
On a wall already demolished
It had been darkened
Looking miserable and tarnished
Yet she didn’t vanish
She only wished it’d tarried
Seeing herself in her mirror unpolished
Imaging her future lonely and famished
She stood in the midst of accusers angered
She had been pretty banished
To live a life in the future barren
In a land unknown and foreign
Hour by hour the sad vision hurried
A hourglass of a future she always dreaded
Finally a reality she realized
Set in motion readied
Hanging unpolished
On a wall already demolished
It had been darkened
Looking miserable and tarnished
Yet she didn’t vanish
She only wished it’d tarried
Seeing herself in her mirror unpolished
Imaging her future lonely and famished
She stood in the midst of accusers angered
She had been pretty banished
To live a life in the future barren
In a land unknown and foreign
Hour by hour the sad vision hurried
A hourglass of a future she always dreaded
Finally a reality she realized
Set in motion readied
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Re. Hourglass of her future
12th May 2020 2:34pm
Re. Hourglass of her future
12th May 2020 3:55pm
Wonderful job with the rhyme ... nice flow with this as well ... welcome to DUP dear poetess ...
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12th May 2020 10:53pm
Re. Hourglass of her future
Sounds like you're living your life hour by hour at the moment with this write.
Well written & rhymed I have to say.
Well written & rhymed I have to say.
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Re: Re. Hourglass of her future
14th May 2020 5:29pm
Well, sometimes we get trapped in the horror of the future we envisioned. However, we hold ourselves up and go down on that journey. This piece is not about me though, maybe not to some degree, ha-ha, just have met and heard stories of how the future they didn't want turned into something they lived in. Anyways, thanks Billy_Snagg ;)
Re. Hourglass of her future
14th May 2020 2:10pm
I love how you describe this piece of liquid gold flowing through each line connecting with the depth of the heart and soul respect dear poetess
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Re: Re. Hourglass of her future
14th May 2020 5:34pm
Thank you dear poet and i'm glad you loved it. I'm hoping with every hour to share and to learn. Thanks again.
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