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Free Me
Kismet Karma has kissed the lips of forevermore
Is tender love measured by the truth of what we miss fourscore
In the still of the night, my heart longed, the warmth of my Chi ached only for you
I buzzed in your hive for your Honey, and you never even had a clue
Words of lost dreams, listening to your aspirations, when you were nobody’s fool
In the fate of time, the teacher became the student, my handsome intellectual muse
In the rain, we laughed, and we played
Love, emotions sent, yet, devoid of the heartbeats, were always displayed
To the Heavens I beg, knelt patiently on my knees
My heart, mind, body were all yours to gently appease
Unrefined, unassigned, a diamond in the rough to the laws of poetic degrees
Fast forward to this beautiful grace in time
I am everyone’s heartfelt in the softest merriment, your perseverance has only aged like fine wine
Sips of its intoxication taken every blue moon
It’s here today and gone too soon
Whispers in the dark, mental adoration, mm... loving the elegiac fornication
Captivating doleful eyes, with spinning webs of such passionate works of art
Should my heart stand still, and be blindfolded as you select your ardent stark
Those hands seem broken on that clock as time has slowly tick tocked
Destiny belongs to those who in favor believe
The wondrous secrets of trust, we bind, in faith we love, as the will of the heart conceals the need
Upholding the pleasure of its affection, in the cloak of midnight watching emotions bleed
Free Me
Is tender love measured by the truth of what we miss fourscore
In the still of the night, my heart longed, the warmth of my Chi ached only for you
I buzzed in your hive for your Honey, and you never even had a clue
Words of lost dreams, listening to your aspirations, when you were nobody’s fool
In the fate of time, the teacher became the student, my handsome intellectual muse
In the rain, we laughed, and we played
Love, emotions sent, yet, devoid of the heartbeats, were always displayed
To the Heavens I beg, knelt patiently on my knees
My heart, mind, body were all yours to gently appease
Unrefined, unassigned, a diamond in the rough to the laws of poetic degrees
Fast forward to this beautiful grace in time
I am everyone’s heartfelt in the softest merriment, your perseverance has only aged like fine wine
Sips of its intoxication taken every blue moon
It’s here today and gone too soon
Whispers in the dark, mental adoration, mm... loving the elegiac fornication
Captivating doleful eyes, with spinning webs of such passionate works of art
Should my heart stand still, and be blindfolded as you select your ardent stark
Those hands seem broken on that clock as time has slowly tick tocked
Destiny belongs to those who in favor believe
The wondrous secrets of trust, we bind, in faith we love, as the will of the heart conceals the need
Upholding the pleasure of its affection, in the cloak of midnight watching emotions bleed
Free Me
Published 7th May 2020
Author's Note
Love.. it's so beautiful the foundation of outlasting its tender needs. This poem was based on Barbra Streisand Song, Evergreen..
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7th May 2020 5:15pm
10th May 2020 2:42am
Thank you my poet for taking the time to read and then commenting, do enjoy your Saturday and the rest of your weekend as well
7th May 2020 10:25pm
Favourite lines ( for rhyme as well as sense of fleeting opportunity):
Sips of its intoxication taken every blue moon
It’s here today and gone too soon
Sips of its intoxication taken every blue moon
It’s here today and gone too soon
10th May 2020 2:44am
And I always admire your sweet summary, in addition, thank you for taking the time to read as well. I wish you an early morning in the UK and a blessed church service
10th May 2020 7:29am
Where we live our 'church services' are online via Zoom, led from our Rector's (in US read pastor's) house because church buildings are closed to services in our lockdown. Gives views inside other people's rooms!
8th May 2020 3:11am
10th May 2020 2:47am
You think my friend, ahh.. such encouraging words, and so very much appreciated. Thank you for the read, and continue to enjoy your evening and a relaxing Sunday to you I bid
8th May 2020 11:59am
10th May 2020 2:53am
In the bliss of those five caressing words, lays dormant the realm of celestial passio, and thank you sincerely for taking the time to read and then commenting, Enjoy the remainder of your weekend my tender poet
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10th May 2020 2:58am
Well this is a beautiful surprise to read your sweet scribbling upon my canvass, tilting my head to get a better view, yes, as I remember a poet who shrouds the heart with meaningful sentiments, thank you for taking the time to read, and for the heartfelt comment. Have an engaging evening and a peaceful Sunday as well
10th May 2020 1:24am
This poem kept my upmost attention, from the first word, to the last. Very well written.
10th May 2020 3:01am
Words of the wise is much sweeter when it rolls off the tongue of an intellectual poet, and this poetess is blushing form ear to ear. Thank you my handsome one for taking the time to read and then commenting. I wish you a prosperous evening and have a great Sunday
