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6th May 2020 5:18pm
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7th May 2020 1:49pm
6th May 2020 7:28pm
I have a different perspective. No Queens set before is only Prince
7th May 2020 1:50pm
11th May 2020 3:45am
It's a great thought provoking write...
Sometimes our focus is on the want,...the "ultimate, perfect price"
rather then the need that can be fulfilled by something or someone else... that would be come the jackpot...
Sometimes our focus is on the want,...the "ultimate, perfect price"
rather then the need that can be fulfilled by something or someone else... that would be come the jackpot...
13th May 2020 4:48pm
12th May 2020 11:46pm
The thrill of the chase is many a hunter's flaw
It can be problematic to be chasing after the wrong person
All that time lost thinking that chosen person is right person
When the truth and reality of the situation shows that a wrong choice was made from the beginning
It can be problematic to be chasing after the wrong person
All that time lost thinking that chosen person is right person
When the truth and reality of the situation shows that a wrong choice was made from the beginning
13th May 2020 4:49pm
True very very true...
I guess humans are flawed cause we all making the same mistake...
Thank you
I guess humans are flawed cause we all making the same mistake...
Thank you
13th May 2020 1:41am
Your poem is the story of my life. Once I did look around and saw her. The love that followed was mythical. Thank you for sharing such a profound and passionate look at love and the need to look at that person who could make our dreams come true.
John
John
13th May 2020 4:50pm
That's a victory for you and me bro I'm happy that you did..
Hope the world joins you in that
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Thank you fellow poet
Hope the world joins you in that
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Thank you fellow poet
