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Sleep
I think to myself it'll be alright
Close my eyes and I won't cry
Flip the switch, turn on the light
Fight the monster that may hide
Go to sleep and dream of peace
Think and smile as you sleep
Wake tomorrow and feel release
Live your life as you believe
Close my eyes and I won't cry
Flip the switch, turn on the light
Fight the monster that may hide
Go to sleep and dream of peace
Think and smile as you sleep
Wake tomorrow and feel release
Live your life as you believe
Author's Note
It's a short poem I did. Only 2 stanzas.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Sleep
5th May 2020 6:57am
Re: Re. Sleep
26th May 2020 2:33am
Thank you. I have been going through things and I'm trying to move past it. Thanks for liking it.
Re: Re. Sleep
26th May 2020 2:50am
Re: Re. Sleep
26th May 2020 2:59am
Thank you. I appreciate that. We all have our issues. Mine were health related and came quick. Thank you for understanding. You have a good heart and I appreciate you saying that.
Re: Re. Sleep
26th May 2020 3:07am
Heath relayed issues can sometimes be the scariest. In many ways they are beyond the realm of our control. Again, I can relate, I am battling them as well.
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Re. Sleep
5th May 2020 8:16am
Great poem. You have fight the monster inside to get to inner peace. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Sleep
26th May 2020 2:34am
Re. Sleep
7th May 2020 8:29pm
Re: Re. Sleep
26th May 2020 2:35am
Thank you. I've been dragged through hell and I'm just starting to make my way out. I appreciate the feedback and I hope to read some of your work.
Re. Sleep
15th May 2020 6:46pm
Sometimes the shorter the piece the more punch it packs in it's delivery and this packed a powerful punch.
Fight on.
Fight on.
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Re: Re. Sleep
26th May 2020 2:36am
Thank you. Means a lot. Life has been hard lately. I'm going to read some of your work. I just had too much for me to handle. It wasn't just personal. If was my health. Everything came fast and I was screwed. Thanks for the feedback.