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Blood Moon
My love for you is like a river
it's like a summer breeze
inside that makes my soul shiver
one kiss from you is
more precious than gold
So please awaken my soul
So we can be together
Until the end of time
it's like a summer breeze
inside that makes my soul shiver
one kiss from you is
more precious than gold
So please awaken my soul
So we can be together
Until the end of time
Author's Note
I get inspired by the Fresh Prince of Bel-Air tv show. Always show kindness and respect towards women.
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Re. Blood Moon
28th Apr 2020 11:28am
I admire this soft poem from you and I am feeling this ink spill, your beautiful pen is so versatile my poet
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28th Apr 2020 8:22pm
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22nd Sep 2020 3:18am
Come here...we are under the moon my handsome poet...its is time to unleash that roar you have been seeking
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22nd Sep 2020 3:22am
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22nd Sep 2020 3:24am
Are the door lock...take off you clothes my poet...mmm.. and let me see the pleasure of what my eyes shall feast...oh...slow...I want envision every rippling muscles ... you make me moist in all my tight spaces.. oo.. very nice
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Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 3:27am
I wii take my time we all the time in the world my Erotic Queen. Purr purr purr purr louder my Erotic Queen.
Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 3:29am
Mm... kneel on your knees and spread me.. softly taste me...yes.. put a passion mark right there.. cup my buttocks.. and delve your tongue deeper
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Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 3:32am
I delve my tongue deeper and deeper your soul explodes with pleasure my Erotic Queen.
Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 3:38am
Gyrating my your tongue...oh papi...you got me so hot...pinching my breast nipple … I want to feel you deep inside me.. after I climax all over your tongue.. oh yes.. cup my ass and sink that tongue deeper.. smearing my juices on my breast.. lick it off
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Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 3:41am
I will smear your juices on your breast and I will suck them for good tasting nectar my Erotic Queen.
Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 3:48am
Oh Francisco my handsome poet...you making me want to climax... mm.. kissing your shoulder blade.. sucking the sweat off you night...out tongue bonding...oh...yes right there... my fingers going up and donw your back...oh.. baby.. yes...
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Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 3:52am
Yes Yes Yes Yes my Erotic Queen it taste so good would like to taste your nectar from lips my Erotic Queen.
Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 3:58am
Then kiss me...blend you mouth jucies with mine...while I palm your girth.. stroking you up an down would you like me taste you my handsome poet
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22nd Sep 2020 4:01am
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22nd Sep 2020 4:08am
Mm..palming you.. sniffing under your sac.. lifting your girth my tongue stroking up and down your taut skin... small kisses to the tip of your erection...oh yes, running the lenght against my lips.. opening my mouht.. coveting your lust.. inch by inch.. kissing the back of my thraot. .loving your hisses.. mmm... reaching down playing wiht my tits...mmm.. up and down my head bobbling...
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Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 4:11am
Yes my Erotic Queen your boobs are beautiful, they feel so good in my hands.
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22nd Sep 2020 4:16am
Yes...oh yes...your hot mouht feels good on my nipple while you cupping my ass... fingers my asshole...oh baby... that feels like paradise...kissing me under my chin...down my cleave...going to your kness...lifting my leg over your shoulder.. peel back my clit and oh...sweet mercy...
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Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 4:19am
My mouth is going deeper deeper deeper deeper inside your sweet kittycat until you exploded with pleasure my Erotic Queen.
Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 4:25am
Oh...don't move just let me move my cunt against your lips..as you taste my climax all over your tongue.. oh...Francisco. mmm.. yes swallow my essence then lean up here and kiss me.. letting me taste what you do to me...purrringgggggggggg
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Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 4:28am
Yes my Erotic Queen you taste good and my lips are coming so you taste yourself my Erotic Queen.
Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 4:33am
Mmm.. we are floating in how do you say it, orgasmic bliss.. now kiss me softy and finger me and wish me a good night and sweet dreams... I like your silken canvass.. I tend to get naked...very easy.. my handsome poet
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Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 4:36am
Good night sweet tasty Erotic Queen listen to the song touch me in the morning. See you in our naughty wet dreams my Erotic Queen.
Re: Re. Blood Moon
22nd Sep 2020 4:40am
I will and you listen to the song, Last Night.. goodnight my handsome poet and naughty dreams
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22nd Sep 2020 4:43am
Re. Blood Moon
1st May 2020 11:01am
A charming appealing poem inviting and dreaming love in a poetic way in brevity. Kudos for this.
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2nd May 2020 2:49am