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Your poetry
I love the way you
romance with words;
the way you play with them
....weave them beautifully
into a gorgeous tapestry
...called poetry.
How well you know
the right use of delicious,
luscious words
The way you arrange them
...string them together creating
a heavenly harmony
that's just simply breathtaking!
Your poetry picks up on its wings
one's spirit, carrying it to
an ethereal realm...
Stirring up ocean of emotions
within one's soul...
Giving words to one's feelings that was lying hidden somewhere
...unknown
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Re. Your poetry
Beautiful poem. Your lovely words are making gooey and mushy. Keep on writing.
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24th Apr 2020 8:09am
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24th Apr 2020 10:20am
This is wonderful ... great flow ... love the structure of it too ... excellent poeting ...
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24th Apr 2020 10:57am
Thank you for appreciating this humble piece... Glad this work appealed to your poetic senses.
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25th Apr 2020 4:37am
That was so beautiful :)
It's good to have you here InDreamz! <3
I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
It's good to have you here InDreamz! <3
I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
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25th Apr 2020 8:09am
Thank you NB for the encouraging feedback. Appreciate your read and kind review.
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10th May 2020 12:33pm
I guess I'm going to have to read this poem 1000x in anticipation for your next, lol. Jk... but I really liked, just reading this again, and am looking forward to seeing more from you :)
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10th May 2020 12:56pm
I really appreciate this encouragement by you....i guess, now I'll havta pen down something :)
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5th May 2020 5:32pm
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Thank you for visiting my page, dear poet.
This poem is the outcome of the powerful effect of some of the incredibly beautiful poems I have read. Indeed, Words possess magic!
This poem is the outcome of the powerful effect of some of the incredibly beautiful poems I have read. Indeed, Words possess magic!
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9th May 2020 12:49pm
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10th Jun 2020 9:19pm
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10th Jun 2020 9:21pm
Thank you so much, dear poet for your kind words and addition of this piece to your reading list. Much appreciated :)
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10th Jun 2020 9:26pm
welcome !! and i already added it on my reading list , hope you gonna do the same !! thanks in advance , Dear Poet !!
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15th Jun 2020 5:56am
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14th Sep 2020 3:01am
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Anonymous
14th Sep 2020 9:56pm
Hey Dreamz........brilliantly written tribute.......this touches the soul........enjoyed.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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14th Sep 2020 10:00pm
It's so nice to see you gracing my page with such wonderful n kind comments.
Thank you so much, dear flowergirl for the read and encouraging words. 😊🌷
Thank you so much, dear flowergirl for the read and encouraging words. 😊🌷
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21st Oct 2020 1:03pm
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21st Oct 2020 1:06pm
Hey, thanks a bunch sweets.
This piece was inspired by someone's poetry. Some people simply weave magic with words...
This piece was inspired by someone's poetry. Some people simply weave magic with words...
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30th Jun 2021 10:41pm
Ah, Dear Poetess🎖
Every once in a great while one comes upon something uniquely charming and special, in ways that catch one's mind's-eye, filling their imagination with wondrous sensations of overflowing bliss ⁓ soft as lovers' first kiss.
Fraught with rapturous imagery of an enchanted spell, cast with alluring fervor across the page in spark'ling stardust infused ink, your skillfully laid words dance and sing to every romantic fibre of a bard's susceptible desires. With deft strokes and caresses of a knowing artist with purposeful pen, you've rendered poetic beauty felt exclusively in deepest of poetic dreamz. ✨
Truth is, you entice an intense yearning for such an enthralling poem, composed in homage to every poetess and poet lucky enough to have had the pleasure of reading this virtual masterpiece from You … power of the written word is palpably irresistible, indeed.
Well, I could pontificate over the wonderful warming effect of your words, but lest I wear my welcome, let me close with a most gracious, "Thank You, Dear Lady-Poet, for adding an extra beat to my appreciative heart … hugs to You!" ⁓ Richard 🍃
Every once in a great while one comes upon something uniquely charming and special, in ways that catch one's mind's-eye, filling their imagination with wondrous sensations of overflowing bliss ⁓ soft as lovers' first kiss.
Fraught with rapturous imagery of an enchanted spell, cast with alluring fervor across the page in spark'ling stardust infused ink, your skillfully laid words dance and sing to every romantic fibre of a bard's susceptible desires. With deft strokes and caresses of a knowing artist with purposeful pen, you've rendered poetic beauty felt exclusively in deepest of poetic dreamz. ✨
Truth is, you entice an intense yearning for such an enthralling poem, composed in homage to every poetess and poet lucky enough to have had the pleasure of reading this virtual masterpiece from You … power of the written word is palpably irresistible, indeed.
Well, I could pontificate over the wonderful warming effect of your words, but lest I wear my welcome, let me close with a most gracious, "Thank You, Dear Lady-Poet, for adding an extra beat to my appreciative heart … hugs to You!" ⁓ Richard 🍃
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I apologize for the late response but I needed to read it and re read it.... I needed your marvellous review (which I admit, is in itself a poetry) to sink in.... I tried to soak up in every word of yours till I was saturated with your adulation.... Really, it has left me exhilarated...speechless.... Breathless...
All I can say is... Thank you... Thanks a bunch, dear Richard 😊🌷🌷🌷
All I can say is... Thank you... Thanks a bunch, dear Richard 😊🌷🌷🌷
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2nd Jul 2021 10:08pm
I wondered if I may have whisked you off to sleep 😉
Then, finally, comes your delightfully scintillating response, Dear Lady-Poet 🍷
Ummm, equal a thousand reviews, and oh sooo worthy the wait for such sweetly stimulatingly, encouraging adjectives.
Only a truly knowing poetess could lay such deliciously enthralling turns of phrase upon a willing, spellbound bard's ardent ear.
I feel as though I've been caressed by butterfly kisses.
Speak of saturated, You fill me ever-so warmly, to the brim! ⁓ RJ 🍃
Then, finally, comes your delightfully scintillating response, Dear Lady-Poet 🍷
Ummm, equal a thousand reviews, and oh sooo worthy the wait for such sweetly stimulatingly, encouraging adjectives.
Only a truly knowing poetess could lay such deliciously enthralling turns of phrase upon a willing, spellbound bard's ardent ear.
I feel as though I've been caressed by butterfly kisses.
Speak of saturated, You fill me ever-so warmly, to the brim! ⁓ RJ 🍃
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20th Jul 2022 9:50am
Thank you so much, dearest for your generous reviews.... I'm so overwhelmed by your kind n sweet comments... And highly honoured n humbled by the reading list adds of so many of my pieces... Ever grateful to you 🙏😊🌹
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20th Jul 2022 10:43am
Re. Your poetry
14th Oct 2022 1:10am
I'm in your first poem now
Her wonderful words exude the scent of romance and love for poetry
I loved the way you recited the poem
Her wonderful words exude the scent of romance and love for poetry
I loved the way you recited the poem
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14th Oct 2022 1:10am
I'm in your first poem now
Her wonderful words exude the scent of romance and love for poetry
I loved the way you recited the poem
Her wonderful words exude the scent of romance and love for poetry
I loved the way you recited the poem
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Thank you graciously, dear poet. Your encouraging n beautiful comment has made my day. 😊 Grateful to you for investing your time to explore my work 🌹
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14th Oct 2022 11:36am
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1st Feb 2023 3:01pm
This is amazing, your words pay homage to poets, which is heart warming. The art is pleasant, when you look closely there are subtle things which break out. The mirror of the sun, and the yellow almost looks like flames. It is not just flowers, there is poetry to the image.
regards
James
regards
James
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2nd Feb 2023 7:42am
I'm so glad that you liked both my words and the card. 😊 It's always to great to see your beautiful thoughts on my work. Much thanks dear James 🌹
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Anonymous
21st Jun 2023 10:12pm
there's a word
in japanese
''uyiko''
means that living out of problems, living peacefully
idk why but this word came up to my mind when i read your poems
you gave me peace
in japanese
''uyiko''
means that living out of problems, living peacefully
idk why but this word came up to my mind when i read your poems
you gave me peace
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21st Jun 2023 10:38pm
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9th Sep 2023 8:06pm
When I read this I think about a song:
"His spirit joined and so was formed
Ten thousand years ago
Between the swan and Hercules
Where even dark clouds glow
To live with grace, to ride the swell
To yet be strong of will
To love the wind, to learn its song
And empty space to fill
Apollo taught me to rhyme
Orpheus taught me to play
Andromeda cast down her sign
And vega lights my way
Smoke rings in a galaxy
An endless flight through time
Lyra gave her harp to him
And left him free to climb
A winter's journey from the moon
To reach the summer sun
To rise again, to sing for you
A song that's yet unsung
Apollo taught me to rhyme
Orpheus taught me to play
Andromeda cast down her sign
And vega lights my way
His spirit joined and so was formed
Ten thousand years ago
Between the swan and Hercules
Where even dark clouds glow
To live with grace, to ride the swell
To yet be strong of will
To love the wind, to learn her song
And empty space to fill"
"His spirit joined and so was formed
Ten thousand years ago
Between the swan and Hercules
Where even dark clouds glow
To live with grace, to ride the swell
To yet be strong of will
To love the wind, to learn its song
And empty space to fill
Apollo taught me to rhyme
Orpheus taught me to play
Andromeda cast down her sign
And vega lights my way
Smoke rings in a galaxy
An endless flight through time
Lyra gave her harp to him
And left him free to climb
A winter's journey from the moon
To reach the summer sun
To rise again, to sing for you
A song that's yet unsung
Apollo taught me to rhyme
Orpheus taught me to play
Andromeda cast down her sign
And vega lights my way
His spirit joined and so was formed
Ten thousand years ago
Between the swan and Hercules
Where even dark clouds glow
To live with grace, to ride the swell
To yet be strong of will
To love the wind, to learn her song
And empty space to fill"
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23rd Oct 2024 10:36pm
I found it ironic that as I read this I could have repeated the same beautiful words about your poetry. It appears your skill with poetry was established from the beginning of your account.
Beautiful words and thoughts here, I.D.
Beautiful words and thoughts here, I.D.
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23rd Oct 2024 10:49pm
Oh...I'm on cloud 9 now....I don't consider myself a poet ....I still need to work on my writing skills...
But thank you ,Tim😊
Btw, this isn't my first account on dup ...before this I was here as Mystical Rose...but had to delete that account as I was harrassed by a poet here....
But, i love dup...so few weeks later I created this ac
But thank you ,Tim😊
Btw, this isn't my first account on dup ...before this I was here as Mystical Rose...but had to delete that account as I was harrassed by a poet here....
But, i love dup...so few weeks later I created this ac
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23rd Oct 2024 11:36pm
Wow, I didn't know that. I'm assuming (though I don't know) that most of the trolls or trouble makers are gone from here.
I'm glad you opened a new account. The site is better for it. :)
I'm glad you opened a new account. The site is better for it. :)
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23rd Oct 2024 11:50pm
No...there is another psycho trolling me...I will be complaining about him to the mods
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24th Oct 2024 00:17am
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24th Oct 2024 11:46am