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Now I'm here to sit and reason, that castrate
Mourning the established, our kin to grave or cremate
Gone Alladins cave, treasured part of our being
To change my life and sense of meaning
The glacier face, death dissolved it time ,and not vanish
Gold that has no tarnish
Carved in yesterdays, forever
How hard the pain for each impromptu sever
Seek and find no hand to grasp
Not to bear the coffins weight
A handkerchief dry tears of hollow loss
To grieve and find its illegitimate
Mourning the established, our kin to grave or cremate
Gone Alladins cave, treasured part of our being
To change my life and sense of meaning
The glacier face, death dissolved it time ,and not vanish
Gold that has no tarnish
Carved in yesterdays, forever
How hard the pain for each impromptu sever
Seek and find no hand to grasp
Not to bear the coffins weight
A handkerchief dry tears of hollow loss
To grieve and find its illegitimate
Published 18th Apr 2020
| Edited 19th Apr 2020
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19th Apr 2020 00:56am
What a wonderful poem, Slip. I loved the essence of this, and particularly enjoyed your vocabulary choices. You've come so far, please don't forget to polish the poem once finished - run that spell check.
Now I'm here to sit and reason, that castrate
Mourning the established, our kin to grave or cremate
Gone Alladins cave, treasured part of our being
To change my life and sense of meaning
The glacier face, death disolved it time ,and not vanish ( dissolved )
Gold that has no tarnsh ( tarnish )
Carved in yesterdays, forever
How hard the pain for each inpromptu sever ( impromptu )
Seek and find no hand to grasp
Not to bear the coffins weight
A handkerchief dry tears of hollow loss
To grieve and find its illigitimate ( illegitimate )
Now I'm here to sit and reason, that castrate
Mourning the established, our kin to grave or cremate
Gone Alladins cave, treasured part of our being
To change my life and sense of meaning
The glacier face, death disolved it time ,and not vanish ( dissolved )
Gold that has no tarnsh ( tarnish )
Carved in yesterdays, forever
How hard the pain for each inpromptu sever ( impromptu )
Seek and find no hand to grasp
Not to bear the coffins weight
A handkerchief dry tears of hollow loss
To grieve and find its illigitimate ( illegitimate )
19th Apr 2020 3:36am
Done. I wrote it off the cuff on my mobile while waiting for the wife at the supermarket . STAY SAFE YA ALL
